This is a sub-page of Proto:Shining Force II.
Story#
Shrine#
Slade – an anthropomorphic rat thief – and two hired goons enter an old shrine. They go over to the lower-right hallway and find nothing.
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April Script
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Final Script
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Then, Slade goes over to the lower-left hallway.
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April Script
Yes! I found some hidden
stairs! |
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Final Script
Hey! I found some hidden
stairs! |
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Slade directs the goons over to the other corner.
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April Script
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Final Script
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Slade enters the hidden Room of the Ancient Shrine.
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April Script
I wonder if they're here?! |
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I wonder if they're here? |
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He looks in a nearby treasure chest.
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Translation Notes
This is the Japanese name of the item. The actual item is called Power Water in both drafts.
This is only different because the script isn't using a proper pointer to the item's name. |
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April Script
discarded the
Power Wine. |
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Final Script
discarded the
Power Water. |
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April Script
Where on earth are those
jewels? |
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Final Script
Where on Earth are those
jewels? |
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Slade looks to the center of the room, where two objects shine through the darkness.
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April Script
Something is shining overthere...! |
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Final Script
Something is shining over
there...! |
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Granseal Castle#
The scene switches to Granseal Castle's throne room at night. There's a thunderstorm outside.
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April Script
It's unusual for time of
season. |
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Final Script
It's unusual for this time
of year. |
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A lone soldier walks into the king's chamber.
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April Script
It's time to go to the
Ancient Tower? |
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Final Script
Is it time to go to the
Ancient Tower? |
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April Script
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The soldier walks off. Suddenly, the king feels a gust of wind.
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April Script
Make sure all the doors
windows are shut! |
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Final Script
Make sure all the doors and
windows are shut! |
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The candles are quickly blown out.
Shrine (again)#
Cut back to Slade and co. working on trying to pull the jewels out of the chamber. Slade tries last...
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Well....that didn't work. |
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Final Script
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Slade decides to pull out both of the jewels at the same time...which works, though Slade gets thrown across the room.
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April Script
Oh, they're here!
I did get the legendary
jewels! Bravo! |
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Final Script
Oh, I got them!
I have the legendary
jewels! Bravo! |
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The shrine starts shaking violently.
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April Script
We must escape from the
tower! Follow me! |
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Final Script
We must escape from the
shrine! Follow me! |
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While Slade and his cronies escape...
Granseal Castle (again)#
...King Granseal and the minister are in the dark throne room.
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April Script
Somebody bring a light to the
King's room! |
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Somebody bring a light to the
King's Chamber! |
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A blinding lightning strike lights the room back up. The minister looks out the window at the Ancient Tower...
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It's collapsing...
Maybe it struck by lightning? |
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Final Script
It's collapsing!
Maybe it was struck by
lightning? |
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King Granseal believes that the tower is disaster-proof. The scouting soldier comes back and says the tower doors have opened! The minister decides to go with the scout.
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Show me to the sealed door. |
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Take me to the sealed door. |
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April Script
Sire, I'm going to confirm
what happened! |
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Final Script
Sire, I'm going to go and
see what happened! |
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The King contemplates his situation while the minister is away.
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Strange, strange in deed! |
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More lightning strikes. King Granseal sees a flash of a shadowy figure in the chamber. Then the figure appears again.
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That's not my fancy!
Somebody's in this room! |
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Final Script
It's not my imagination!
Somebody's in this room! |
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The figure, revealed as a green demon, materializes in front of the king and begins to cast a spell.
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Final Script
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The King is knocked out by the spell. End of game. I mean, end of scene.
Witch's Forest#
'''''Fade to an enclosure in a dark forest. The only figure around is a purple-cloaked witch stirring something in a giant cauldron.
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April Script
Hee, hee, hee...
Finally you're here!
Ah, you look so confused.
You don't know why you're
here.
Yes, yes...I used a charm
on you.
Ha, ha, where are you
going? You can't escape
from this mystery forest
unless you grant me my
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Hee, hee, hee...
You're finally here!
Ah, you look so confused.
You don't know why you're
here?
Yes, yes...I used a spell
on you.
Ha, ha. Where are you
going? You can't escape
from this mystery forest
unless you help me. |
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April Script
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Final Script
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This is the save/load menu. Umm, I mean it's the enchanted and ancient temporal point between parallel worlds...menu.
CHOOSING A NAME:
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[Hero]...
nice name, hah?
I'll let you decide the
difficulty level at this
time. |
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[Hero]...
Nice name, hah?
I'll let you decide the
difficulty level at this time. |
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Final Script
[Hero]...
Nice name, huh?
I'll let you decide the
difficulty level at this time. |
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There are four options: Normal, Hard, Super, and "Ouch!" Super is actually the most difficult mode.Path. Most difficultpath.
CHOOSING "NORMAL":
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What? There is no
difference! |
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CHOOSING "SUPER":
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Final Script
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CHOOSING "OUCH!":
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April Script
What? Do you want to die? |
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Final Script
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Now it's off to help the witch...in the most roundabout way possible.
(Source: Original TCRF research)
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