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Story#
Granseal#
Bowie, the blonde-haired protagonist of this game, continues the tradition of many RPG heroes and starts the game waking up. After being greeted by his mother, he walks to Sir Astral's school, where Sarah, a healer, and Chester, a centaur, are already seated.
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April Script
Sir Astral isin the
basement
but, he looks
strange today. |
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Final Script
Sir Astral is in the
basement, but he looks
strange today. |
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Bowie goes to the school's basement, where Sir Astral is mumbling.
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April Script
Mmm...aaaa.....
Oh, yeah! It must be....
no, it's not.... |
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Final Script
Mmm...aahh...
Oh, yeah! It must be....
No, it's not a.... |
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Bowie approaches Sir Astral, who says he'll start class soon. As Bowie is about to leave, Sir Astral asks if he heard anything strange the other night.
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April Script
Perhaps it was just my
fancy. Sorry. |
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Final Script
Perhaps it was just my
imagination. Sorry. |
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Sir Astral starts the class proper by taking attendance. The fourth student, Jaha, is not present.
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April Script
Overslept again?
Oh, well. I can't wait him. |
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Final Script
Overslept again? Oh, well.
I can't wait for him. |
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A soldier scampers into the classroom and asks for Sir Astral.
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April Script
The minister asks if you
would come to the castle! |
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Final Script
The minister would like you
to come to the castle! |
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Sir Astral agrees, leaving his class behind. The students wonder what to do now.
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April Script
He was acting too strange! |
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Final Script
He was acting so strange! |
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Sarah says she has a plan to get into the castle.
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April Script
No kidding, ?
We're just kids.
They wont let us in. |
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Final Script
We can't, !
We're just kids.
:They won't let us in. |
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After Sarah convinces Bowie through a Yes/No prompt, the group heads for the castle gates, where two guards are stationed.
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April Script
We are the pupils of his
school. He left a package
behind, and.... |
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Final Script
We're his pupils.
He left a package behind,
and.... |
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April Script
You came here to deliver
it to him? |
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Final Script
You want to deliver it to
him? |
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This is enough to convince the world's stupidest guards.
Granseal Castle#
The force venture into the castle, up to the King's bedchamber, where the king lies ill. Sir Astral, the Minister, and Princess Elis talk about the King's situation.
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April Script
He is suffering badly
from something badly... |
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Final Script
He is suffering from
something badly... |
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As Sir Astral tries to figure out what's wrong with the King, he looks back and is startled to see his pupils in the room. He asks why they came in the first place.
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April Script
Well, we just...followed
you to...see the King. |
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Final Script
Well, we just followed you... |
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April Script
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Final Script
Sir Astral, who are they? |
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Sir Astral admits that they're his pupils.
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April Script
So they are. They look
like good lads. |
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Final Script
So they are. They look
like good kids. |
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The Minister wonders if he has a reason for them to be there. After giving a death glare to Bowie and co., he says that they'll help him investigate the tower. Heading downstairs, Sir Astral admits what's about to happen.
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April Script
I didn't want to
involve you, my kids...but
this might be a good
opportunity. It is a
practice for you
to serve the King. |
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Final Script
I didn't want to involve
you, my children...but
this might be a good
opportunity for you to
learn how to properly
serve your King. |
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After falling for the Yes/No prompt again, the force heads into the Sealed Tower.
Sealed Tower#
Sir Astral begins by inspecting the red symbol at the top of the stairs.
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April Script
Yes, I feel something
strange around here. |
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Final Script
I have a strange feeling
about this place. |
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Suddenly, a white pulsating light makes its presence known.
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April Script
Look! Something is
emerging. What's that? |
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Final Script
Look! Something is
appearing. What's that? |
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A pink, smokey monster emerges from the red marking
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April Script
An evil Gizmo! A devil
that possesses man!
Why have you appeared? |
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Final Script
An evil Gizmo! A devil
that possesses people!
Why are you here? |
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The Gizmo tries to get by Sir Astral, but he's blocked at every pass.
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April Script
Where are you going?
Are you...going to possess
the king? |
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Final Script
Where are you going?
What...wait! You're here to
possess the King, aren't you? |
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April Script
I won't let you pass.
You will only bring
trouble to him! |
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Final Script
I won't let you pass.
You shall not harm the King! |
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The Gizmo responds by spewing out six weaker Gizmos. Good job, Astral.
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April Script
Huh! Huh!
We'll stop Evil Gizmo here.
, defeat these
Gizmos! |
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Final Script
This doesn't look too good.
We'll stop the evil Gizmo
here. , defeat
these fiends! |
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He totally did.
Area Dialogue#
Granseal#
Bowie inspects the well in front of his house...
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April Script
A water...
(gulp, gulp)...yuck!
That tastes disgusting! |
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Final Script
Soapy water...
(gulp, gulp)...yuck!
That tastes disgusting! |
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...and reads the sign outside of the tool shop.
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April Script
Welcome!
Weapons and tools |
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Final Script
Welcome!
WEAPONS and ITEMS |
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A soldier/truant officer guards the town's only exit.
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April Script
There is no school outside!
Get back here! |
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Final Script
There is no school outside!
Go to school! |
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Trying to get into the harbor is also a no-go
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April Script
Granseal's harbor is ahead.
All ships have left early
this morning. |
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Final Script
Granseal's harbor is behind
me.
All ships left early this
morning. |
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Sir Astral has a lot of books, being a teacher and all. Some of them aren't exactly school appropriate.
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April Script
A book...
SMART GIRLS
...sounds nice. |
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Final Script
A book...
SEGA GUIDE
...sounds good. |
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Translation Notes
This was already censored from the Japanese version.
There, the book title was "Mufufu, A Surprise for the Maiden" |
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(Translation: RahanAkero, Joe)
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April Script
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Final Script
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Translation Notes
The Japanese version's book title is みどりがめと とつぜんへんい, "Turtles and Mutations".
Either a reference to Gamera or Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. |
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April Script
A book...
AN OLD GOAT
...Is he really wise? |
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Final Script
A book...
AN OLD GOAT
...Sir Astral? |
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Translation Notes
More censorship of Sir Astral's lecherous nature.
The Japanese book title is, "The Beginning of Shameless Perversion." |
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(Translation: RahanAkero)
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April Script
A book...
GUIDE TO THE PALACE |
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Final Script
A book...
GUIDE TO THE CASTLE |
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Granseal Castle#
Soldiers on the outer perimeter mill about with nothing to do, what with it being peacetime and all.
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April Script
Do we really need to
safeguard the country? |
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Final Script
Do we really need to guard
our country? |
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April Script
I'm going to Ancient
Shrine in the south to
kill the rats. |
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Final Script
I'm going to the Ancient
Shrine in the south to
kill some rats. |
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Further well investigation!
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April Script
A deep, dark well.
...Very cool... |
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Final Script
A deep, dark well.
...very cool! |
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A maid in the Royal Log Bundle room gives her summation of the weather
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April Script
It has been very
worm these days. |
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Final Script
It has been very
warm lately. |
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Two soldiers are stationed in the castle's east tower
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April Script
This east tower
was build in order
to watch invaders. |
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Final Script
This east tower was built
in order to watch for
invaders. |
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April Script
How fine it is!
I can see the eastern
continent very well. |
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Final Script
How fine the view is!
I can see the eastern
continent from here. |
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Someone said the King didn't eat...but who??
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April Script
The soldier said that
the King didn't eat today. |
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Final Script
The cook said that the
King didn't eat today. |
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Finally, an intriguing book from Princess Elis' room.
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April Script
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Final Script
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(Source: Original TCRF research)
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