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Story#
Ribble#
Bowie and friends saunter into Ribble. One blonde-haired boy spots him.
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April Script
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Final Script
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April Script
You're a spy from the
stranger's town, aren't
you? |
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Final Script
You're a spy from the new
town, aren't you? |
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The boy runs to the mayor's house. Every other house in the town is locked, so Bowie follows. He's quickly pushed out of the Mayor's house by the man himself, who asks who (and what) they are.''
The boy tells the Mayor that there must be soldiers waiting behind the gate. The Mayor, now furious, asks why they're here.''
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April Script
You suddenly came to
Parmecia, and built a
castle!
I don't know who you are,
but all big countries
like war!
I've never seen such an
impolite and violent
guest! |
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June Script
You suddenly appear in
Parmecia, and build a castle!
I don't know who you are,
but all big cities like war!
I've never seen such
impolite and violent guests! |
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Final Script
You suddenly appear in
Parmecia, and build a castle?
I don't know who you are,
but all big cities like war!
I've never seen such
impolite and violent guests! |
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Translation Notes
The mayor's first sentence has a different inflection in the final script. |
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The boy has figured out Bowie's master plan: He's here to conquer Parmecia! Peter politely tells them to shut up.
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April Script
Hey, [Hero]!
Why are you so quiet?
I can't stand it! |
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Final Script
Hey, [Hero]!
Why don't you say something?
I can't stand this! |
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April Script
Hey, you! I think
I understand you, but
listen to me! |
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Final Script
Hey, you! I think I
understand how you feel,
but listen to me! |
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April Script
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Final Script
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Peter tells them of the great demon-quake that forced the people of Granseal to the mainland. Oh, and that he's not even from Granseal.
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April Script
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Final Script
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April Script
I'm [Peter]!
We're Phoenix living in
Mt. Volcano. |
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Final Script
I'm [Peter]!
I'm a phoenix that lives in
Mt. Volcano. |
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April Script
Phoenix!
The legendary bird? |
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Final Script
A phoenix!
The legendary bird? |
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This impresses the old codger, though Peter isn't sure why. The Mayor quickly changes his mind.
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April Script
Of course, we of Ribble
will make an alliance
with Granseal...and
I promise we will welcome
you when you visit us
again! |
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Final Script
Of course, we of Ribble
will become allies of
Granseal.
I promise that we will
welcome you when you visit
us again! |
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Then, as quickly as fading to black, the townspeople emerge from their now unlocked homes.
At the gate, a female centaur comments on the cowardice of her neighbors.
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April Script
When do they ever go
adventures?
I can't wait any more!
Hey, do you mind
if I join you? |
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Final Script
When do they ever go
adventuring?
I can't take it anymore!
Hey, would you mind if I
joined you? |
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Would you mind if a bow-wielding centaur joined your stand against darkness? No. You wouldn't. May joins the force, and the group heads north.
Cave of Darkness#
The Cave of Darkness at least has a spotlighter on point, so the place isn't totally dark.
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April Script
You'll come to the foot of
Mt. Volcano through this
Dark Tunnel. |
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Final Script
You'll come to the foot of
Mt. Volcano through this
dark cave. |
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April Script
But, I heard this tunnel
is home to Hobgoblins. |
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Final Script
But, I heard this cave is
home to a hobgoblin. |
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An offscreen voice confirms Peter's suspicions!
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April Script
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Final Script
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April Script
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Final Script
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The hobgoblin welcomes the force to his home, and tells them they're not leaving. Too bad Bowie is a terrible guest.
Area Dialogue#
Ribble#
A sailor is checking behind the large hollowed tree in the center of town.
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April Script
A hidden door of an
ancient ruin must be
near this tree! |
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Final Script
The hidden door to the
ancient ruins must be near
this tree! |
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A mother contemplates how to tell her son about her husband's fate.
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April Script
My dad went to the
north cave. |
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Final Script
My dad went to the cave in
the north. |
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April Script
My dearest husband has
never returned from
the cave.
The cave was somehow
blocked...how should I
explain it to him? |
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Final Script
My dear husband never
returned from the cave.
The cave was somehow
blocked. How can I explain
this to my son? |
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The Mayor is more willing to chat now.
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April Script
Our ancestry came from
Rune, a southern
continent, long ago.
Since then, we've come
up here from the south. |
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June Script
Our ancestrors came from
Rune, a southern island,
long ago.
Since then, we've travelled
up here. |
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Final Script
Our ancestors came from
Rune, a southern island,
long ago.
Since then, we've travelled
up here. |
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Translation Notes
"Ancenstrors". Not a word. |
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April Script
Are you going to
Volcanon?
Peter's hometown. |
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Final Script
Are you going to
Mt. Volcano?
That's [Peter]'s hometown? |
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Translation Notes
Volcanon is the god, not the town. Senile old fool. |
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One middle-aged man is tilling what appear to be the town's only fields.
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April Script
We came from Hassan.
Hassan is a port in
the south.
It was once very
prosperous, but now
it's desolate. |
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Final Script
We recently came from Hassan.
Hassan is a port in the south.
It was once very prosperous,
but now it's desolate. |
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Keseran, one of the scholar Rohde's pupils, is studying the ancient ruins under Ribble.
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April Script
Ancient ruins around here
are very interesting!
We're sure there is a
ruin under Ribble, but
where's the door? |
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Final Script
The ancient ruins around here
are very interesting to us!
We're sure there are ruins
under Ribble, but we can't
find the door? |
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Translation Notes
The odd question mark at the end of his text is left over from the April script. |
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Bowie just goes and reads Keseran's diary because he has no respect for anyone or anything. Keseran is trying to find the legendary Caravan.
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April Script
I need Achilles Sword
to defeat Fiant Taros
in the shrine! |
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Final Script
I need the Achilles Sword
to defeat the giant Taros
in the shrine! |
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Haseran, the other pupil, is out, having left his wife behind.
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April Script
Men are so selfish.
My Husband has gone
to the east to work. |
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Final Script
Men are so selfish.
My husband has gone to the
east to work. What about me? |
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Another young man rambles on about something or other.
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April Script
Keseran is a historian.
But Mr. [Rohde] is
greater than him!
I saw a strange hollow
in the tree...to set
something in?
Is what you're looking
for in Ribble? |
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Keseran is a historian.
But Mr. [Rohde] is smarter
than him!
I saw a strange hollow in a
tree. Does something go
there?
Is what you're looking for in
Ribble? |
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Bowie asks the local shopkeepers how to get to Mt. Volcano
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April Script
Go east and then go north
along the river. Volcano
Cave is there.
But, I don't recommend
you go to such a
terrible place! |
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Final Script
Go east and then go north
along the river. A cave is
there.
But, I don't recommend you
enter such a terrible place! |
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April Script
We call it "Cave of
Darkness▓█. You can't
see anything inside. |
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Final Script
We call it the Cave of
Darkness. You can't see
anything inside. |
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Translation Notes
The Cave of Darkness is a nickname in the April script, with "Volcano Cave" as the real name.
The closing quotations in the April text are garbage graphics due to improper formatting. |
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Magic Tunnel Shrine#
Paseran blocks the entrance to this shrine for plot reasons. At least he gives some backstory on the place.
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April Script
I'm Paseran from Ribble.
I'm studying the ancient
characters.
[Rohde] said, "There is a
family who has an ancient
tomb in Parmecia.
According to my study,
there should be his house
around here.
Or, it may be to the east. |
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June Script
I'm Paseran from Ribble.
I'm studying the ancient
petroglyphs.
[Rohde] told me about
a family who has an ancient
tomb in Parmecia.
According to my studies,
his house should be
around here somewhere.
Or, it may it's to the east. |
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Final Script
I'm Paseran from Ribble.
I'm studying the ancient
petroglyphs.
[Rohde] told me about
a family who has an ancient
tomb in Parmecia.
According to my studies,
his house should be
around here somewhere.
Or, maybe it's to the east. |
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(Source: Original TCRF research)
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