This is a sub-page of Proto:Shining Force II.
Story#
Sealed Tower#
The lesser Gizmos are dead, but the pink Gizmo remains. It teleports away...
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April Script
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Final Script
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...and appears right at the tower's exit.
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April Script
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Final Script
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The evil spirit escapes!
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April Script
We must hurry to see the
king! |
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Final Script
We must hurry to the King! |
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Granseal Castle#
In the princess' room, King Granseal and Astral stare each other down. King Granseal tackles him, knocking him down, but then Astral mutters a spell...
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April Script
Evil Spirit inside the king,
leave his body, HAAA! |
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Final Script
Evil Spirit inside the king,
begone, HAAA! |
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The spell knocks the King on the ground, and the evil spirit rises from his body
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April Script
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Final Script
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The evil spirit flies away. King Granseal gets back up and Astral tells him he was possessed
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April Script
What are you talking
about? Tell me. |
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Final Script
What are you talking about?
I don't understand. |
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Astral sighs and passes out.
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April Script
Astral is exhausted.
He won't wake up to any
kind of treatment.
The minister summons the
soldiers to the hall to
kill the evil spirit. |
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Final Script
Astral is exhausted.
He won't wake up!
The Minister summons the
soldiers to the hall to kill
the evil spirit. |
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April Script
...that's all
about the mission. |
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Final Script
That's all the info I can
give you about the mission. |
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April Script
So, all we have to
do is find Evil
Gizmo and kill him. |
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Final Script
So, all we have to do is
find the evil Gizmo and
kill him. |
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The minister confirms this.
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April Script
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Final Script
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The captain soldier nods.
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April Script
Let's go to
defeat Evil Gizmo. |
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Final Script
Let's go and defeat the
evil Gizmo. |
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April Script
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Final Script
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After the soldiers leave, the minister turns to the party.
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April Script
The King is upstairs
to see sir Astral.
You must be worried... |
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June Script
The King is upstairs looking
in on Sir Astral.
You must be worried. |
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Final Script
The King is upstairs looking
in on Sir Astral.
I'm worried. |
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April Script
Is he really all
right? Really? |
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Final Script
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April Script
You don't have to
worry so much...
but anyway he is old. |
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Final Script
Don't worry about him.
If he dies, it doesn't matter.
He's old anyway. |
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After the minister is finished being a dick, the King comes down to the throne room. He asks for the minister
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April Script
Here I am.
What's wrong with you? |
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Final Script
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The King says that Astral just came to.
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April Script
Astral said, he feels
an ill omen behind
the tower and Gizmo. |
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Final Script
Astral said, he feels an ill
omen behind the opening of
the tower and Gizmo appearing. |
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King Granseal says it's important to understand the history behind Grans Island.
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April Script
A historian called
Hawel lives in the
west of Yeel. |
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Final Script
A historian named Hawel
lives northwest of Yeel. |
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The King relays Astral's request to send soldiers to get Hawel.
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April Script
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June Script
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Final Script
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After the minister and King parrot each other for a bit, the King says he has a good idea
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April Script
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Final Script
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King Granseal asks if Bowie and co. can go to Yeel to see Hawel.
If Bowie says No...
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April Script
Do you refuse the
King's order?
Answer again! |
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Final Script
You refuse the King's
wish?!
Answer again! |
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Not wanting to be trapped in an endless loop, Bowie agrees.
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April Script
Thank you.
Depart to see Hawel
immediately. |
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Final Script
Thank you.
Depart to fetch Hawel
immediately. |
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Granseal#
And so the force prepares to go west. At the town entrance, the dwarf Jaha finally makes his appearance.
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April Script
Here you are!
You came so late! |
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Final Script
Here you are!
I've been waiting. |
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Annoyed that he missed going into the castle, Jaha joins the force! The group exits town...and is immediately attacked by monsters.
''Dammit.
Area Dialogue#
Granseal Castle#
Before Astral is knocked out
After the evil spirit's escape, the guard to the Sealed Tower is in a sorry state.
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June Script
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Final Script
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Translation Notes
The June script removed the ellipses but forgot to delete the line break. |
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By the stairs to the king's bedroom, a maid shares what she heard with Bowie
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April Script
Well, boy,
can't you hear a
strange groan?
I don't know why,
but everybody ignores
my question... |
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Final Script
Well, boy. Did you hear a
strange noise?
I don't know why, but
everybody ignores my
questions.... |
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The minister saw something frightening.
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April Script
I saw a devil
went into his body... |
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I saw a devil enter the
King's body... |
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A soldier in the king's bedroom is a bit rattled.
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April Script
Ooo, ouch!
I didn't imagine
he's so strong!
Ouch! I was
knocked down! |
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Final Script
Ooo, ouch!
I didn't think he could
be so strong!
Ouch! I was knocked down! |
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Meanwhile, a soldier tries to explain the situation to Princess Elis.
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Princess Elis!
I can't pass you.
Trust him!
Sir Astral knows
how to cure him! |
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Princess Elis!
I can't let you up there.
Trust Sir Astral!
He knows how to cure
the King! |
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Final Script
Princess Elis!
I can't let you up there.
Trust Sir Astral!
He knows how to cure the King! |
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April Script
Shut up!
Let me see my
father, please! |
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Final Script
Let me pass!
I must see my father! |
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After Astral is knocked out
After Astral's collapse, he rests in the king's bed.
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April Script
Why don't you see
him before you leave?
He must be happy. |
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Why don't you see him
before you leave?
He would be pleased. |
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April Script
Are you going to
see Mr. Howel?
I wouldn't let you
go alone if I were...
I trust you, kid. |
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Final Script
Are you going to see
Mr. Hawel?
I wouldn't let you go alone
if I weren't...
I trust you, son. |
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Translation Notes
Astral isn't Bowie's father, obviously, it's meant to be used as an old-person term of affection. |
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The castle workers try to cope with what's happened, and the messenger from Galam got freaked out. A reasonable reaction.
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The errand from
Galam have left.
He was in such a
flurry and hurry. |
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Final Script
The messenger from
Galam has left.
He was in such hurry. |
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April Script
Princess Elise has not
taken a rest since
the King fell down. |
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Final Script
Princess Elise has not rested
since the King collapsed. |
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April Script
I...I've never seen
such a horrible face...
...oh, King... |
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Final Script
I...I've never seen such a
horrible face... |
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An older man on the outer edge of the castle knows about Yeel.
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Yeel? Yes, a very
small village beside
the mountain.
Go to the northwest to
get to my country. |
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Yeel? Yes, it's a small
village near the mountains.
Travel nortwhest to get there. |
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Translation Notes
A small bit of detail (How the man knows about Yeel) was removed to squeeze the message into three lines. |
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Granseal#
Two women gossip by the town's well.
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April Script
You heard it?
The King is sick. |
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You heard about it?
The King was sick. |
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April Script
Yes, I did hear it.
Soldiers of the palace
were talking about it.
That must be true! |
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Final Script
Yes, I heard about it.
Soldiers of the castle
were talking about it.
It must be true! |
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A pet shop / zoo has opened up. One mother's reason for not taking her son is completely different between scripts.
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April Script
I don't think it's
educative for children. |
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Final Script
I don't think it's right
to hold animals captive. |
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In the zoo proper, one little boy comments on the animals' condition.
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He looks so sad...
...how poor he is... |
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He looks so sad...
I feel sorry for him. |
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This chicken's foul beak was scrubbed clean in the final script. Just filthy.
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April Script
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Final Script
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Bowie's mother praises Bowie just before he heads out for Yeel.
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April Script
Good luck, [Hero].
Your father must be
surprised in the Heaven. |
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Final Script
Good luck, [Hero].
Your father would have
been proud of you. |
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Translation Notes
This is the first of several explicit religious references that were rewritten to be more ambiguous. |
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Finally, the soldier by the exit comments on the Galam messenger's speedy exit
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April Script
That Galam soldier
rushed out of town.
He looked pale. |
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Final Script
That Galam messenger rushed
out of town.
He looked pale. |
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(Source: Original TCRF research)
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