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Home of the Alis Landale Fan Club!

Default#

Exterior#

May Script

You don't know about our
heroine?
You'll be stricken with
divine punishment!
She is a great person, who,
long, long ago, confronted the
evil wizard and conquered him.

Final Script

You don't know about our
heroine?
You'll be stricken by
divine punishment!
She was a great person who
long, long ago confronted and
conquered
the evil wizard.

May Script

Oh, The Ladea Tower?
That's located down south of
this village.
Come to think of it, there was
some other person the other day
who said he was heading for the
tower too.
He was tall and was gazing at
the statue of the heroine for
quite a while.

Final Script

Oh, the Ladea Tower?
That's located south of
this village.
Come to think of it, there was
some other person the other day
who said he was heading for the
tower too.
He was tall and gazed at
the statue of the heroine for
quite a while.

May Script

This heroine of ours
was beautiful.
I admire her!

Final Script

This heroine of ours
is beautiful.
I admire her!

Objects

May & August Scripts

'Statue of Heroine,
 Alis Landale'
A cat? I wonder if it's a pet?

Final Script

'Statue of Heroine,
 Alis Landale'
A cat? I wonder if it's a pet.

Residences#

May Script

At first, I thought little about
moving to Termi, but...
Now with the quicksand, I can't
go home when ever I want to.
And my wife, the way she's
carrying on...

Final Script

At first, I thought little about
moving to Termi, but...
Now with the quicksand, I can't
go home even if I want to.
Besides, my wife would rather
stay here.

Inn#

May Script

Ah, there's lots of greenery
and the smell of the sea!
Here's the statue of the
heroine.
But with that quicksand getting
bigger and bigger...

Final Script

I love this town with all the greenery and the smell of the
sea!
Here's the statue of the
heroine.
But with that quicksand getting
bigger and bigger...

Armor Store#

May Script

In the past, a spell binder came
to town and taught to put
feelings in metal.
And this is the store that has
inherited that spell.

Final Script

In the past, a spell binder came
to town and taught me to put
my feelings in metal.
And this is the store that
inherited that knowledge.

Translation Notes
The May draft is missing a word - it should be "taught how to put feelings in metal."

The later English drafts tried to fix this by adding a few pronouns, but that just confused the issue. The spell binder mentioned in the Armor Store is implied to be Lutz from the first Phantasy Star. Unless this guy is 2000+ years old, there's no way he was taught anything by Lutz.

May Script

It's been said that The Ladea
Tower was erected by the spell
binder who came to town in the
past
.
I'm sure this story has gotten a
little exaggerated.
After all it's an old story.

Final Script

It's been said that the Ladea
Tower was erected by the spell
binder who came to town a long
time ago
.
I'm sure this story has gotten a
little exaggerated.
After all, it's an old story.

Gift Store#

May Script

Are you guys tourists?
Won't you buy 'Alis-Sword'?
I'll give you a discount!

Final Script

Are you guys tourists?
Won't you buy an Alis-Sword?
I'll give you a discount!