the cutting room mirror

Nalya

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This is a sub-page of Proto:Phantasy Star IV: The End of the Millennium.

The town half-destroyed by a careening spaceship. These places just have the worst luck, don't they?

Default#

Exterior#

NPCs

May & August Scripts

This place was our home.
Oh well,
it may be that just coming out
of it alive was miracle.

Final Script

This place was our home.
Oh well,
it may be that just coming out
of it alive was a miracle.

Objects

May Script

It's a jar.
There's nothing inside.

Final Script

It's a jar.
But, there's nothing inside.

Residences#

NPCs

May Script

I have no idea where we would
go.
It's also hard to leave a place
where you've lived for so long.

Final Script

I have no idea where we would
go.
It's so hard to leave a place
where you've lived for so long.

May Script

That lady across the street,
who used to be so kind,
is just nasty all the time now.
I just can't trust humans
anymore!

Final Script

That lady across the street,
who used to be so kind, is now
ill-tempered
all the time.
I just can't trust anyone
anymore!

Translation Notes
There aren't any humans in this entry.

May Script

My friends talk to me anymore.
I'm so lonely... Waaaaa

Final Script

My friends don't talk to me
anymore.
I'm so lonely... Waaaaa...

Translation Notes
The May script is missing an important word here.

May Script

Why was my house destroyed
and the house across
the street was not!
It's not fair!
Don't you agree?
It makes me mad!

Final Script

Why was my house destroyed
and the house across
the street was not!
It's not fair!
Don't you agree?
It makes me so mad!

May Script

I can stop ignoring my friend
now, can't I?
I want to be friends and play
together!

Final Script

I can stop ignoring my friend
now, can't I?
I want to be friends and play
together again!

Objects

May Script

Here's some cheap soda
all in a row.

Final Script

The cupboard is full of linen.

Translation Notes
The soda line gets rewritten for a third time. Where would they be making the stuff, anyway?

May Script

The dishes are all lined up.

Final Script

Wow, look at all this stuff.

Translation Notes
The "stuff" in these cabinets was originally just dishes, which, to be fair, are in a subsection of "stuff".

May Script

...Looks like a household budget
register.

Final Script

Looks like a journal...

Translation Notes
Some of these changes seem arbitrary.

Inn#

May Script

These must be so-called
supplies.

Final Script

Wow, a Game Gear! Can we play?

Translation Notes
Now that's rewriting a generic description.

Tools Shop#

May Script

Whew, thanks to the fact that
I got my wares out early on,
I'm still able to do business.

Final Script

Whew, thanks to the fact that
I got my wares out early,
I'm still able to do business.