Hey, Chaz!
You seem to have become stronger
since we last met!
May Script
I am scolded by Pana,
but I came anyway.
Final Script
I was scolded by Pana,
but I came anyway.
May Script
The system is finally
stabilized!
Now, I can go with you!
Final Script
The system is finally
stabilized!
Now I can go with you!
Everybody...everybody...
Thank you so much!
May Script
Demi, What is this disaster in Motavia?
Final Script
Demi, what is this disaster you reported?
Well, a large hole suddenly
opened north of Piata!
The life forms around that hole
are dying, one after the other!
But there's no gas or radiation
emissions coming from the hole.
May Script
There was no need to verify it!
We knew as soon as we arrived
in Motavia.
It's all due to the 'Black Energy Wave'!
A pretty strong one at that!
It's 'The Profound Darkness'.
He finally opened the door to
a different dimension!
August Script
There is no need to verify it!
We knew as soon as we arrived
in Motavia.
It's all due to the
Black Energy Wave - and
a pretty strong one at that!
It's The Profound Darkness.
He finally opened the door from the other dimension!
Final Script
There is no need to verify it!
We knew as soon as we arrived
in Motavia.
It's all due to the
Black Energy Wave -- and
a pretty strong one at that!
It's The Profound Darkness.
He finally opened the door
from the other dimension.
Chaz, let's go!
Isn't this the last battle?
Really,
you guys need taking care of.
I'll be your big sister and
look after you!
Well,
seeing that we're all here,
I'd like all of you to go,
but...
There are only five 'Rings of
Stars' to protect us from
the power of the 'Darkness'!
So that means we have to choose
one person to take.!
Before heading into The Edge of Darkness, Chaz and co. decided to head back to Rykros to enter a secret third tower.
May Script
The Elsydeon is shining!
Final Script
Elsydeon is shining!
May & August Scripts
A voice is
reverberating in my head...
Final Script
A voice is reverberating
in my head...
May Script
Oh 'Protectors' of Algo...
The Anger Tower welcomes
you with joy.
Final Script
Oh Protectors of Algo...
The Anger Tower welcomes
you gladly.
At the top of the tower (as always), Chaz encounters something most unsettling.
May Script
What? Alys...
You're here at Elsydeon... Alys? Alys!
Hey, answer me, Alys!
Final Script
What? Alys...
You're here on Rykros? Alys? Alys!
Hey, answer me, Alys!
Translation Notes
The first line (そんな…ライラは…このエルシディオンに…。) should translate to something like, "No way...Alys is...inside Elysdeon..." with the implication being that this Alys is an illusion of Elsydeon, which is why it shined at the entrance of the tower.
The final script at least fixes the line to mention the proper location.
(Source: Paul Jensen)
The Alys-looking figure starts pushing Chaz back.
Yikes! Alys?
Chaz has no choice but to defeat the would-be Alys.
Alys... Alys!!!
Ahhhhhhhhh!!!
Heh, heh, heh...
Who's that?
The room goes completely black, and a bejeweled orb of fire appears at the center.
Well, well, 'Protector,'
what a weakling you are.
So you wail and lament
for something you know to be
an illusion.
An illusion?
Is that right...you...
you...!
May Script
Ah, your anger, your hatred,
it's quite a show of your excitement. Hey, wouldn't you like to be
able to wholly transform these
feelings into strength?
Final Script
Ah, your anger, your hatred,
it's quite a show of your force of character.
Would you like to be
able to wholly transform those
feelings into strength?
Huh?
May Script
I'm telling you,
there's a technique to transform
emotions of anger and hatred
into powers of destruction. How about it? Don't you want to know about it?
Final Script
There's a technique to transform
emotions of anger and hatred
into powers of destruction.
Do you want to know about it?
Translation Notes
Re-Faze seems almost chummy in the earlier translation.
If Chaz says "Yes" (Don't say yes):
Hmm, I see...
You say you want to know...
If that's the case,
show your master of the art
with your body!
What?
May Script
Don't you understand the meaning of causing destructing with
anger and hatred! How ridiculous that
a fellow like you is
the successor of Elsydeon! I'll flog that
disposition of yours!
August Script
Don't you understand the true
meaning anger and hatred? It's ridiculous that a fellow
like you could consider himself
worthy to wield Elsydeon!
Final Script
Don't you understand the true
meaning of anger and hatred?
It's ridiculous that a fellow
like you could consider himself
worthy to wield Elsydeon!
Translation Notes
The May script has an extra line here to make the player know that they really should've picked "No".
Chaz gets curb-stomped by Re-Faze. Let's pretend that never happened and assume Chaz said "No":
Don't mess with me!
Huh...why is that?
May Script
Even if I won, using such a
power, it would be meaningless!
It would only make us
the same as the 'Darkness.'
Final Script
Even if I won using such a
power, it would be meaningless!
It would only make us
the same as the Darkness!
May Script
I see...you've been made to
fight the illusion and yet
you haven't lost sight of
yourself.
All right then, I shall entrust
the technique to you! That is, the forbidden
technique...'Megid!'
Final Script
I see...you've fought the
illusion and yet you haven't
lost sight of yourself.
All right, I shall entrust you
with the technique!
The forbidden technique
...Megid!
'Megid'...
The forbidden technique?
May & August Scripts
There's nothing to be
afraid of.
It's necessary to feel anger and
hatred for humans to be human.
Final Script
There's nothing to be afraid of.
It's necessary to feel anger and
hatred for humans to be human.
Oh...
May Script
There shouldn't be any danger
that you would be bewitched by
the power of 'Megid.'
Don't forget that spirit.
Final Script
There shouldn't be any danger
that you will be corrupted by
the power of Megid. Just don't forget your true
self.
At the center of this psychedelic death path is...this...
May Script
...Is this the shape that
The Profound Darkness has taken?
Final Script
...Is this the shape
The Profound Darkness has taken?
Ah!
What's...happening!?
May Script
It's the soul wave of 'The Profound Darkness!'
Anger...hatred...towards all
that lives...
And, a destructive urge!
We've got to destroy this thing!
This being must not exist in Algo!
Final Script
It's an emanation of The
Profound Darkness!
Anger...hatred...of all that
lives...
And, a great need to destroy!
We've got to defeat this thing!
This being must not be allowed
to come to Algo!
Translation Notes
"Soul wave" should probably be "psychic wave" (精神波).
May Script
The resurrection does not seem
to be complete.
We've got to take advantage
this opportunity, Chaz!
Final Script
The portal is not yet
completely open.
We've got to take advantage
of this opportunity, Chaz!
Translation Notes
Another "portal" change here. At least one of the editor was trying to simplify what was going on here.
Right!
Let's go, everybody!
Roger!
May Script
We'll show them! We'll determine
Algo's future...our future!
Final Script
This is it! Now we determine
Algo's future...our future!
(Break)
Ah! What's going on!?
May Script
The force that was controlling
this alternate dimension above
Motavia is gone!
Final Script
The force holding
this dimensional hole open
is gone!
Translation Notes
For the last time, the idea of this place being alternate dimension was changed to a dimensional hole.
I sense a time warp.
It's getting bigger.
Danger! Danger!
Translation Notes
時空歪 is more accurately translated to "space-time distortion". "Time warp" would be 時間の歪み.
It was quite a fun journey, Chaz, the like I haven't had
for a long time.
August Script
It was quite a fun journey, Chaz, the like of which I
haven't had in a long time.
Final Script
It was quite a fun journey, Chaz, the likes of which I
haven't had in a long time.
You should come visit
Dezolis once in a while.
May Script
That's not possible.
They don't have a space ship.
And flapping their arms wont
get them too far. Ha, ha!
Final Script
That's not possible.
They don't have a space ship.
And flapping their arms won't
get them too far. Ha, ha!
May Script
So...I guess it's really good bye, Chaz...
Final Script
So...I guess it's really good-bye, Chaz...
May & August Scripts
What a pity you won't be able
to hear my wit anymore!
Final Script
What a pity you won't be able
to enjoy my wit anymore!
May Script
I will go to Zelan
to assist my master. Good bye, Chaz.
Eventually, the time will come
when both my master and I will
become unnecessary to Algo.
But, until that time, I will
work to complete my duties.
August Script
I will go to Zelan
to assist my master. Good-bye, Chaz.
Eventually, the time will come
when both my master and I will
become unnecessary to Algo.
But, until that time, I will
work to complete my duties.
Final Script
I will go to Zelan
to assist my master Wren.
Good-bye, Chaz.
Eventually, the time will come
when both my master and I will
become unnecessary to Algo.
But, until that time, I will
work to complete my duties.
May Script
After I take everybody to
Dezolis, I will return to
Zelan.
I guess you will need the
support of the system a little
while longer.
Final Script
After I take everybody to
Dezolis, I will return to Zelan.
I guess you will need the
support of the system a little
while longer.
Wren...where's Rika?
She has already gone to
the Landale.
Parting must be difficult
for her.
I...see.
May Script
Good bye, Chaz.
Stay well.
I await the day
when you come to visit.
Final Script
Good-bye, Chaz.
Stay well.
I believe we will meet again.
Translation Notes
Wren's last line to Chaz in the Japanese script: "あなた方の子孫が、自分の力で私を訪ねてくる日を…待っています。", or, roughly, "I await the day when your descendants can visit me through their own power." Chaz doesn't have access to a spaceship, so he can't exactly come to visit.
Rika, we are leaving.
Yes.
They're gone.
Wren, I...
May & August Scripts
Rika,
the road you choose will
difficult.
You are our hope.
You must be strong and
live with pride.
Final Script
Rika,
the road you choose will probably be painful and
difficult.
You are our hope.
You must be strong and
live with pride.
Translation Notes
One last improper text pointer was fixed in the final script.
Yes! Wren...
Thank you!
I've got to get back to Tonoe. Chaz, thanks for everything!
I feel that I learned a lot
from this trip. Thanks!
May Script
I'm returning to the Academy.
After all this, I've become kind of disgusted with the
Academy, but...
I'll have to transform that
felling into my inner strength! Good bye, Chaz. It will be my life's pride that
I did battle with you!
August Script
I'm returning to the Academy.
After all this, I've become
disgusted with some of the people there, but...
I'll just have to transform those fellings into inner
strength! Good-bye, Chaz. I will always be proud that
I fought beside you!
Final Script
I'm returning to the Academy.
After all this, I've become
disgusted with some of the
people there, but...
I'll just have to transform
those feelings into inner
strength!
Good-bye, Chaz.
I will always be proud that
I fought beside you!
May Script
Chaz...I guess it's good bye.
Final Script
Chaz...I guess it's good-bye.
Rune...
May Script
Even though the battle against those evil-minded rascals is
over, my mission as Lutz must
continue...
You see, I must watch over
Algo.
I'm still lacking in training
and experience.
I must continue to improve
myself and eventually pass
it on to the next Lutz...
Final Script
Even though my battle against the ultimate fiend is over, my
mission as Lutz must continue...
You see, I must watch over all Algo.
I'm still lacking in training
and experience.
I must continue to improve
myself, and eventually pass
it on to the next Lutz...
May Script
Won't we...be able to see
each other anymore?
Final Script
Won't we...meet again?
May Script
Probably not.
You silly! Don't cry...
You can now live without anyone
else's help...
Final Script
Probably not.
You silly! Don't cry...
You can live now without anyone
else's help...
Rika!
Chaz!
Rika!
Rika!
Chaz!
So long, Chaz...
Take care!
Rune...
May Script
Rune...thank you...
And good bye!
Final Script
Rune...thank you...
And good-bye!
May 30
Final
The long battle is over.
We were able to sever ourselves
from that terrible curse of yore.
We were able to free ourselves
from the terrible curse of yore.
To the souls of those who
sacrified their lives for Algo
sleep in peace.From person to person...From age to age...As long as memories last...We will not forget the
sacrifices that have been made.
May 30
Final
The one thousand year cycle of
Light and Dark has bid their end
and now the curtain will be raised on a new age...
The eons-old struggle between
Light and Dark has ended,
and now the curtain rises on a new age...
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From person to person...
From age to age...
As long as memories last...
We will not forget the