2nd Scenario

This is a sub-page of The Hundred Line: Last Defense Academy/Script Changes/Early English Script.

These changes all come from Chapter 00_0_a and Chapter 00_1, the Last Defense Academy 2nd Scenario.

Chapter 00_0_a-003 (Day 3)#

Chapter 00_0_a-008 (Day 8)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d008_m070_010	390	Sirei: It'll all be for nothing if THIS one falls. Our defenses are stretched thin without you three!	Sirei: It'll all be for nothing if THIS one falls. Our defenses are stretched thin without you four!	Four people left on the mission: Takumi, Hiruko, Tsubasa, and Shouma.
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d008_m210_010	210	Tsubasa: We'll tell you the whole story on the journey over. But we need to hurry!	Tsubasa: We'll tell you the whole story on the way back. But we need to hurry!

Chapter 00_0_a-011 (Day 11)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d011_m040_010	90	I told them she had a connection with Sacred Hope Hospital, and had volunteered for a cryptoglobin transfusion.	I told them she had a connection with Kamukura General Hospital, and had volunteered for a cryptoglobin transfusion.	More references to Sacred Hope Hospital.
	190	Sirei: Golly... To think someone from Sacred Hope could sneak in like this... Talk about a security blind spot.	Sirei: Golly... To think someone from Kamukura could sneak in like this... Talk about a security blind spot.
	320	Takemaru: I've been wonderin'... How come none of us remember anything from that Sacred Hope place?	Takemaru: I've been wonderin'... How come none of us remember anything from that Kamukura place?

Chapter 00_0_a-017 (Day 17)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d017_m020_010	200	Nozomi: ...All right. For starters, it's like Takumi told you. When I was little, I volunteered to help with Sacred Hope's cryptoglobin research.	Nozomi: All right. For starters, it's like Takumi told you. When I was little, I volunteered to help with Kamukura's cryptoglobin research.	More references to Sacred Hope Hospital.
	210	Nozomi: Ever since then, they've performed experiments on me, trying to figure out how to infuse this power into other people.	Nozomi: They performed experiments on me, to try and figure out how to infuse this power into other people.
	780	Kako: Well, there's still the question of why we don't remember our time in Sacred Hope Hospital...	Kako: Well, there's still the question of why we don't remember our time in Kamukura General Hospital...

Chapter 00_0_a-018 (Day 18)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d018_m030_010	110	Yugamu: Oh, the stuff about Sacred Hope, right? From when we got our cryptoglobin transfusions?	Yugamu: Oh, the stuff about Kamukura, right? From when we got our cryptoglobin transfusions?	More references to Sacred Hope Hospital. The last line has an unused voice clip associated with it.
	150	Takumi: So, it's not from Sacred Hope Hospital?	Takumi: So, it's not from Kamukura General Hospital?
	260	Shouma: We were all taken to Sacred Hope Hospital to act as research subjects. Not when we were teenagers, but when we were little kids.	Shouma: We were all taken to Kamukura General Hospital to act as research subjects. Not when we were teenagers, but when we were little kids.

Chapter 00_0_a-025 (Day 25)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d025_m030_010	20	Nigou: The ingredients I'll need to make the special medicine are Special-grade Medicinal Herbs, Energy Drinks, and Health Foods.	Nigou: The ingredients I'll need to make the special medicine are Special-grade Medicinal Herbs, Energy Drinks, and Supplements.	One of the items necessary for the medicine was changed from the oddly named "Health Foods" to the more sensible "Supplements".

Chapter 00_0_a-028 (Day 28)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d028_m020_010	770	Sirei: You kids play nice with the transfer student, now. I don't want any of you making her feel like she's not welcome.	Sirei: You all play nice with the transfer student, now. I don't want any of you making her feel like she's not welcome.	"Kid".

Chapter 00_0_a-033 (Day 33)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d033_m130_010	300	Takumi: An avatar sent by the baby inside the Defense Room...	Takumi: An avatar sent by the boy inside of the Defense Room...	"Baby" is technically correct. This might count as a "kid" removal.

Chapter 00_0_a-047 (Day 47)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d047_m030_010	490	Moko: What are middle schoolers doing here? This is the Tiger's Den... It's a fearsome place, you know?	Moko: What are you two doing here? This is the Tiger's Den... It's a fearsome place, you know?	Same reasoning as the last hallucination sequence on Day 87 of the 1st Scenario. However, it is interesting to note that Kako refers to her and Ima as middle schoolers later in this scene and this is not changed in the final game, possibly because the line is voiced. Also, "uni" in reference to food refers to sea urchin in Japanese.
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d047_m030_010	500	Ima: This school is closer to our house than the nearest middle school.	Ima: This class was closer than the class that we had on our schedule.
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d047_m040_010	120	Kako: I'll have a uni cream soda...	Kako: I'll have a sea urchin cream soda...
	130	Mr. Nigou: Y-Your teacher is not an errand boy! And you two are supposed to be in middle school!	Mr. Nigou: Y-Your teacher is not an errand boy! And you two are supposed to be in Gym class!
	530	Kako: And my uni cream soda?	Kako: And my sea urchin cream soda?
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d047_m080_010	280	Kako: And uni cream sodas, too...!	Kako: And sea urchin cream sodas, too...!

Chapter 00_0_a-049 (Day 49)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d049_m070_010	100	Takumi: Aren't you still a minor?	Takumi: You sure you should be drinking that?	Age reference, with regards to Hiruko having a bottle of wine.
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d049_m110_010	10	Gaku: Hey, Takumi... that Undying Flames kid that you want to make one of us, he's like a ghost, right?	Gaku: Hey, Takumi... That Undying Flames guy that you want to make one of us, he's like a ghost, right?	"Kid".
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d049_m200_010	280	Sirei: You kids fighting on the frontlines are humanity taking their next step forward!	Sirei: You all fighting on the frontlines are humanity taking their next step forward!	"Kid".

Chapter 00_0_a-050 (Day 50)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d050_m030_010	310	Takumi: These are pictures of the guy in the Defense Room. Why are there so many?	Takumi: These are pictures of the baby in the Defense Room. Why are there so many?	Rare reverse example of clarifying age, but it is very clearly a baby's body in the Defense Room.

Chapter 00_0_a-053 (Day 53)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d053_m020_010	100	Nozomi: It's not that I don't eat much, my body is just like that.	Nozomi: It's not that he doesn't eat much... His body just can't handle that much.	Nozomi is the one talking about Shion, not Shion talking about himself.

Chapter 00_1-058 (Day 58)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d058_m010_040	1170	Sirei: That's when a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity came along. It was around 17 years ago, I believe.	Sirei: That's when a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity came along. It was around a couple of decades ago, I believe.	Another age obfuscation but, interestingly, the new line implies Shion is about 20 years old at least.

Chapter 00_1-061 (Day 61)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d061_m020_010	200	Shouma: We were all taken to Sacred Hope Hospital to act as research subjects. Not when we were teenagers, but when we were little kids.	Shouma: We were all taken to Kamukura General Hospital to act as research subjects. Not when we were teenagers, but when we were little kids.	Another reference to Sacred Hope Hospital.

Chapter 00_1-067 (Day 67)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d067_m060_130	200	Ima: Pretty much everything from when we were at Sacred Hope Hospital, as well.	Ima: Pretty much everything from when we were at Kamukura General Hospital, as well.	More references to Sacred Hope Hospital, as well as the original age of the students as 17. The last line has an unused voice clip associated with it.
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d067_m070_020	120	Shouma: Our memories of our lives in the complex, all 17 years of it…	Shouma: Our memories of our lives in the complex...
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d067_m070_020	250	Shouma: We were...created...in Sacred Hope Hospital.	Shouma: We were...created...in Kamukura General Hospital.

Chapter 00_1-071 (Day 71)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d071_m020_020	370	Nozomi: Specifically, ones of what happened when I went to Sacred Hope when I was little.	Nozomi: Specifically, ones of what happened when I went to Kamukura when I was little.	Another reference to Sacred Hope Hospital.

Chapter 00_1-072 (Day 72)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d072_m030_010	110	The 17 years of my life that were a complete lie, and the 70 days that were real...	All the years of my life that were a complete lie, and the 70 days that were real...	Another reference to the students' original age.
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d072_m290_020	90	We were all clones, artificial humans created at Sacred Hope Hospital.	We were all clones, artificial humans created at Kamukura General Hospital.	Another reference to Sacred Hope Hospital.

Chapter 00_1-075 (Day 75)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d075_m020_020	40	Sirei: He always wanted to go to school like a normal kid... That's why we made it look the way it does.	Sirei: He always wanted to experience going to school... That's why we made it look the way it does.	"Kid".
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d075_m020_040	40	Sirei: You were grown in cultivation machines in Sacred Hope Hospital up until you reached the age you are now.	Sirei: You were grown in cultivation machines in Kamukura General Hospital up until you reached the age you are now.	Another reference to Sacred Hope Hospital.
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d075_m020_100	60	Sirei: Around 17 years ago, a being with limitless power was born on this planet.	Sirei: Around a couple of decades ago, a being with limitless power was born on this planet.	Another obfuscation of Shion's age.
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d075_m020_120	60	Sirei: Shion was born here on Futurum a little over 17 years ago. Due to a random mutation, he has incredibly powerful cryptoglobin.	Sirei: Shion was born here on Futurum...some time ago. Due to a random mutation, he has incredibly powerful cryptoglobin.	Another obfuscation of Shion's age.
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d075_m030_010	245	[no line]	Sirei: Or perhaps...that "glitch" is a bug planted by the insurgents in this operation...	This line was actually added later on, possibly to provide a vague allusion to the existence of the Anti-Exodus Faction.

Chapter 00_1-087 (Day 87)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d087_m020_010	50	Dahl'xia: You're really alive. How long has it been now... 17 years, I think?	Dahl'xia: You're really alive. It's been years...	Another obfuscation of Shion's age.

Chapter 00_1-091 (Day 91)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d091_m050_010	10	Sirei: Attention, everyone! I have a message from Yugo Kojima, age 45, and Tokyo Residential Complex resident!	Sirei: Attention, everyone! I have a message from 49-year-old Yugo Kojima, Tokyo Residential Complex resident!

Chapter 00_1-092 (Day 92)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d092_m070_010	60	Sirei: That these children fighting valiantly on the battlefield will be able to shine in the entertainment business as well!	Sirei: That these students fighting valiantly on the battlefield will be able to shine in the entertainment business as well!	~~"Kid".~~ "Child".

Chapter 00_1-093 (Day 93)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d093_m040_010	30	Dahl'xia: Have at you!	Dahl'xia: I have come!	Different battle cry for Dahl'xia.

Chapter 00_1-099 (Day 99)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
s00_0_2ndtruer_00_d099_m030_010	120	Sirei: Enough talk, kids. It's almost time.	Sirei: Enough talk, everyone. It's almost time.	"Kid".