1st Scenario

This is a sub-page of The Hundred Line: Last Defense Academy/Script Changes/Early English Script.

These changes all come from Chapter 00_0, the Last Defense Academy 1st Scenario.

Chapter 00_0-000 (Day ???)#

Chapter 00_0-001 (Day 1)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d001_m010_010	140	Several kids my own age were also here, each of them slumped over a desk, just like I'd been a moment ago.	Several others my own age were also here, each of them slumped over a desk, just like I'd been a moment ago.	"Kid". Funnily enough, Ima and Kako (who are present) are decidedly not Takumi's age.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d001_m030_020	60	Sirei: You can call me Sirei. Got it?	Sirei: You can call me...Sirei! Got it? Sirei. Or just "Sir."	From Sirei's introduction cutscene.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d001_m030_030	980	Sirei: Oh, no no no no no! That would be simply barbaric! Where do you kids get these ideas?	Sirei: Oh, no no no no no! That would be simply barbaric! Where do you get these ideas?	"Kid".
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d001_m040_020	80	Gaku: I'm no fighter, I'm just a kid! You'd have to have a screw loose to want to fight those things!	Gaku: I'm no fighter, I'm just a regular dude! You'd have to have a screw loose to want to fight those things!
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d001_m120_010	140	Sirei: That's just your narrow viewpoint of what's "normal" talking. You Tokyo Residential Complex kids are all like that.	Sirei: That's just your narrow viewpoint of what's "normal" talking. All of you from the Tokyo Residential Complex are like that.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d001_m120_010	420	Sirei: Kids these days are so self-centered. We're talking about the future of humanity here, you know?	Sirei: Young people these days are so self-centered. We're talking about the future of humanity here, you know?
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d001_m160_010	260	Hiruko: One more thing... If this mission is as important as you say, why would you assign it to a bunch of teenagers?	Hiruko: One more thing... If this mission is as important as you say, why would you assign it to such a small group?	The script has no qualms about calling them teenagers. This may just be a rewrite to fit Hiruko's usual way of speaking.
	680	Kako: Right, why us? My dear brother and I haven't even graduated junior high yet...	Kako: Right, why us? I haven't even solved my first mystery yet...	The game still refers to the twins as middle schoolers in Ima's first Bond Event.
	710	I get where Tsubasa is coming from, though. Yesterday, I was a normal high school kid.	I get where Tsubasa is coming from, though. Yesterday was just another normal day.	"Kid".

Chapter 00_0-002 (Day 2)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d002_m130_010	170	Takumi: But if this power is so "miraculous" or whatever, why give it to regular high school kids like us?	Takumi: But if this power is so "miraculous" or whatever, why give it to regular students like us?	"Kid".
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d002_m130_015	120			"Kid".

Chapter 00_0-005 (Day 5)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d005_m020_010	50	Takumi: ...Has anyone seen him since he disappeared?	Takumi: Has nobody been looking for him...?	Regarding Sirei's disappearance.

Chapter 00_0-006 (Day 6)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d006_m010_010	100	Am I just that desperate to see her again? Is it my subconscious' way of dealing with all this?	Am I that desperate to see her again? Or am I just that homesick...?	Regarding Takumi's dreams about Karua.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d006_m100_010	330	Before I could ask any questions, Eito lost consciousness again. I hoisted him onto my back and we all made our way back to the school.	Before I could ask any questions, Eito lost consciousness again. I continued carrying him as we all made our way back to the school.	As shown in the CG, Takumi is already carrying Eito on his back.

Chapter 00_0-008 (Day 8)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d008_m030_010	40	Ima: This "Takoyaki & Rice" set meal is simply delectable! I've never eaten rice this fluffy before.	Ima: This "Taco Rice" set meal is simply delectable! I've never eaten rice this fluffy before.	The Tsukumo twins' weird tastes are made even weirder with this slight change. Or less weird, maybe.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d008_m030_010	70	Tsubasa: Does takoyaki NEED to be sweet...?	Tsubasa: Does taco rice NEED to be sweet...?

Chapter 00_0-011 (Day 11)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d011_m030_010	40	After a little while, the door slid open a crack.	After a little while, the door slowly opened.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d011_m030_010	120	Gaku: Regular high schoolers don't just go from living normal lives to fighting monsters without a second thought.	Gaku: Regular people don't just go from living normal lives to fighting monsters without a second thought.	Removing a reference to them being high schoolers is odd given Eito still calls them high-school seniors in his introduction.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d011_m120_010	260	Tsubasa: B-But I really can't fight. It's a constitutional issue...	Tsubasa: B-But...fighting is difficult for me. It’s a physical thing...	"Constitutional" is technically used correctly here, but doesn't really fit Tsubasa's way of speaking.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d011_m120_010	430	Tsubasa: It's a constitutional issue because medicine doesn't work. I've tried all sorts of things since I was little, but none of them worked.	Tsubasa: It's a physical thing, and medicine doesn't help the issue. I've tried all sorts of things since I was little, but none of them worked...
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d011_m130_010	160	I proceeded to tell Eito about Tsubasa's proclivity for puking.	I proceeded to tell Eito about Tsubasa's tendency to puke.	Similar reasoning as above regarding the word "proclivity".

Chapter 00_0-012 (Day 12)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d012_m040_010	150	Takumi: If you ever feel like you're gonna puke, you can puke inside that without causing trouble for anyone else.	Takumi: If you're gonna spew...spew into this. That way, you won't cause trouble for anyone else.	From Tsubasa's Persuasion segment.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d012_m040_010	310			From Tsubasa's Persuasion segment.

Chapter 00_0-014 (Day 14)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d014_m050_010	120	Takumi: No, no. This wasn't meant to be transactional like that.	Takumi: No, no. I'm not asking you to fight just in exchange for this gift.	Rewritten likely to fit Takumi's way of speaking.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d014_m070_010	720	Gaku: I'm still just a kid, so why did I have to work this much? What did I do to deserve this?	Gaku: Why did I have to work this much? What did I do to deserve this?	"Kid".
	1030	Gaku: Do you know what I've been through over the last 17 years because of those stupid brats?	Gaku: I've had to suffer my entire life because of those stupid brats!	Whenever the early script gives a specific number to the students' age (excluding the twins, of course) it's always 17.
	1350
	1680	Gaku: I'm still just a kid too!	Gaku: Well, I'm just a boy and life is a nightmare...	"Kid".

Chapter 00_0-015 (Day 15)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d015_m120_030	300	Eito: Thank you. It's probably best if we keep things between the three of us at this stage.	Eito: Thank you. I think it's best if we talk in private, just the three of us, before involving anyone else.

Chapter 00_0-022 (Day 22)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d022_m080_010	320	Shouma: Anyway, it was a place called Sacred Hope Hospital.	Shouma: Anyway, it was a place called Kamukura General Hospital.	More references to Sacred Hope Hospital. Some of these lines have unused voice clips associated with them.
	330	Takumi: Sacred Hope... Doesn't ring any bells...	Takumi: Kamukura... Doesn't ring any bells...
	440	Shouma: Yes, those ones. That's what they put me inside at Sacred Hope.	Shouma: Yes, those ones. That's what they put me inside at Kamukura.
	610	Takumi: What about this "Sacred Hope Hospital"?	Takumi: What about this "Kamukura General Hospital"?

Chapter 00_0-028 (Day 28)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d028_m030_010	740	Where did all that venom come from?! Do rich kids really hate regular people this much?	Where did all that venom come from?! Do wealthy people really hate regular folks this much?	"Kid".
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d028_m040_010	60	Kurara: It's a one-of-a-kind material hand made by my favorite pop group! They'd never done any weaving before, but people will do anything if you pay or threaten them enough!	Kurara: It's a one-of-a-kind material, handmade by my favorite idol group! They'd never done any weaving before, but people will do anything if you pay or threaten them enough!	It's Japan; "idol group" is the more likely wording.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d028_m040_010	70	Takumi: You made pop singers do that?!	Takumi: You made an idol group do that?!	It's Japan; "idol group" is the more likely wording.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d028_m050_010	530	Nigou: You've got the wrong end of the stick, old boy. It's time you accepted that.	Nigou: You've got it all wrong, old boy! It's time you accepted that.	"Wrong end of the stick" is an old informal British English saying. Fitting for Nigou, and understandable given the localization team seems to be based out of the UK, but maybe a bit too much here.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d028_m110_010	140	Karua was more timid than most kids our age. A real scaredy cat. She'd go out of her way to avoid any kind of conflict.	Karua was more timid than most people. A real scaredy cat. She'd go out of her way to avoid any kind of conflict.	"Kid".

Chapter 00_0-029 (Day 29)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d029_m010_010	570	Ima: I'll have you know, my dear sister's predictions are incredibly accurate! She's right at least 70% of the time, every time!	Ima: I'll have you know, my dear sister's predictions are incredibly accurate! She's right at least 60% of the time, every time!	This is noteworthy just because they had to fix the Anchorman reference.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d029_m090_010	20	No one had the energy to stand on ceremony. We devoured it like wild animals.	No one bothered with manners. We devoured it like wild animals.	More odd-but-not-technically-incorrect wording changed.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d029_m090_010	350	Eito: We have so many new allies, new friends... My heart feels fit to burst...	Eito: We have so many new allies, new friends... My heart feels like it's going to burst...	More odd-but-not-technically-incorrect wording changed.

Chapter 00_0-030 (Day 30)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d030_m050_070	810	Takemaru, Gaku, and Tsubasa got up to leave. I didn't have the heart to stop them. The tension in the room was already dangerously close to the breaking point.	Takemaru, Gaku, and Tsubasa left the room. I didn't have the heart to stop them. The tension was already dangerously close to the breaking point.	The three were likely already standing, given the CG of them and other SDU members locked in an argument.

Chapter 00_0-031 (Day 31)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d031_m040_010	320	I think I just lost my appetite.	The breakfast that day was as tasteless as the atmosphere...

Chapter 00_0-033 (Day 33)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d033_m050_010	200	Takemaru: What was it called again... Sacred Hope?	Takemaru: What was it called again... Kamukura?	More references to Sacred Hope Hospital. Some of these lines have unused voice clips associated with them.
	290	Shouma: This time...I remembered why I was put in those machines at Sacred Hope Hospital.	Shouma: This time...I remembered why I was put in those machines at Kamukura General Hospital.
	510	Shouma: You were all in those machines at Sacred Hope Hospital, just like me.	Shouma: You were all in those machines at Kamukura General Hospital, just like me.
	630	Tsubasa: But I've never even heard of Sacred Hope Hospital. How could I have checked into it?	Tsubasa: But I've never even heard of Kamukura General Hospital. How could I have checked into it?
	1450	Nozomi: I'll try to talk them round, but it's going to take time.	Nozomi: I'll try to convince them, but it's going to take time.

Chapter 00_0-035 (Day 35)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d035_m140_010	180	Kako: Letting yourself get eaten... Anpan guy!?	Kako: B-But why would you wan—?!	Removal of a very odd reference to episode 205 of the anime Gintama', where the character Yamazaki slowly loses his mind after eating nothing but anpan during a stakeout. Usually Kyoshika is the one to make manga and anime references...

Chapter 00_0-046 (Day 46)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d046_m060_010	1290	Takumi: The ones about us being experimented on in that place... Sacred Hope Hospital, was it?	Takumi: The ones about us being experimented on in that place... Kamukura General Hospital, was it?	Another reference to Sacred Hope Hospital.

Chapter 00_0-050 (Day 50)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d050_m010_010	40	Sirei: You've made it to Day 50! Ooh, you're halfway there! Like a lizard on a chair!	Sirei: Get ready for your 50th day of active service here at Last Defense Academy! That's right folks, you're halfway there! Like a lizard on a chair!	The "Livin' on a Prayer" reference was originally...slightly more obvious.

Chapter 00_0-066 (Day 66)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d066_m070_010	10	Takemaru: Hey, what the hell is going on? Where'd that invader dame run off to?	Takemaru: Hey, what the hell is going on? Where'd that invader chick run off to?	"Dame" is a very odd word choice for pretty much any of the students, especially Takemaru.

Chapter 00_0-069 (Day 69)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d069_m080_010	20	When I called out from the doorway, she finally turned her face toward me, still in her bed.	When I called out to her from the doorway, she slowly lifted herself out of bed.	Nozomi wouldn't be able to look at Takumi in the doorway from her bed. It's against the wall on the same side as the door, past a little hallway of sorts, and would barely be visible looking down the bedroom entryway from the door.

Chapter 00_0-071 (Day 71)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d071_m050_010	500	Kako: I'll go and get everybody's Infusers!	Kako: I'll grab the Infusers and go start the bus!	This seems backwards, as Kako is obviously too young to drive, but it does make her sound more eager.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d071_m070_010	10	Kako: I brought everyone's Infusers! Let's go. Ima's counting on us!	Kako: I brought everyone's infusers, and the bus is all warmed up! Let's go. Ima's counting on us!

Chapter 00_0-072 (Day 72)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d072_m080_030	170	Nozomi: My mother studied cryptoglobin for many years, at a facility called Sacred Hope Hospital.	Nozomi: My mother studied cryptoglobin for many years, at a facility called Kamukura General Hospital.	More references to Sacred Hope Hospital.
	180	Takumi: Huh? Sacred Hope Hospital...	Takumi: Huh? Kamukura General Hospital...
	190	Shouma: You were all in those machines at Sacred Hope Hospital, just like me.	Shouma: You were all in those machines at Kamukura General Hospital, just like me.
	240	Nozomi: Sacred Hope Hospital looks like a regular hospital on the surface, but it's actually a cryptoglobin research facility.	Nozomi: Kamukura General Hospital looks like a regular hospital on the surface, but it's actually a cryptoglobin research facility.
	350	Takumi: But all of us had that blood transfused into us, right? At Sacred Hope Hospital.	Takumi: But all of us had that blood transfused into us, right? At Kamukura General Hospital.

Chapter 00_0-074 (Day 74)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d074_m070_010	280	Nozomi: My mom was a researcher working at Sacred Hope Hospital. She was involved in a project to save humanity.	Nozomi: My mom was a researcher working at Kamukura General Hospital. She was involved in a project to save humanity.	More references to Sacred Hope Hospital. Some of these lines have unused voice clips associated with them.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d074_m070_010	480	Nozomi: Then, on a day when the other workers were off, I went with my mom to Sacred Hope Hospital...	Nozomi: Then, on a day when the other workers were off, I went with my mom to Kamukura General Hospital...
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d074_m080_010	30	Nozomi: After my mother's suicide, I snuck into Sacred Hope Hospital a few times.	Nozomi: After my mother's suicide, I snuck into Kamukura General Hospital a few times.
	220	Nozomi: But the last time I snuck into Sacred Hope Hospital, I just happened to find you guys...	Nozomi: But the last time I snuck into Kamukura General Hospital, I just happened to find you guys...
	324	Takumi: So we were all put inside those and sent here from Sacred Hope Hospital?	Takumi: So we were all put inside those and sent here from Kamukura General Hospital?

Chapter 00_0-082 (Day 82)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d082_m020_020	10	Kyoshika: Sir Ima looks like a mascot, but his brain is still that of a middle schooler...	Kyoshika: Sir Ima looks like a mascot, but his brain is still that of a young man...	Again, Ima's first Bond Event still calls him and Kako middle schoolers.

Chapter 00_0-085 (Day 85)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d085_m040_010	40	Gaku: You have way too much life experience for a middle schooler.	Gaku: You have way too much life experience for someone your age.	See last section.
	50	Ima: It's true, not many middle schoolers can say they've been mascots before!	Ima: It's true, not many people can say they've been mascots before!
	60	More like none at all...	I...don't think that's what he's referring to here.

Chapter 00_0-087 (Day 87)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d087_m020_010	510	Tsubasa: Oh! You guys are back? What are middle schoolers doing here, anyway?!	Tsubasa: Oh! You guys are back? What are you doing here, anyway?!	See last section again. The final game itself seems to be playing coy, what with the hesitation on the "educational institution" remark.
	520	Ima: This school is closer to our house than the nearest middle school.	Ima: This school is closer to our house than any other...educational institution in the area.
	540	Kako: Besides, middle school classes are way too easy...	Kako: Besides, classes are way too easy...
	550	Ima: We're genius middle schoolers, after all. Sorry to the rest of you.	Ima: We're geniuses, after all. Sorry to the rest of you.
	680	I'm a student at Last Defense Academy, and these other kids are my classmates.	I'm a student at Last Defense Academy, and the others are my classmates.	"Kid".

Chapter 00_0-091 (Day 91)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d091_m080_010	80	Kurara: You're connected to Sacred Hope Hospital, right? You're one of the people responsible for making us fight here.	Kurara: You're connected to Kamukura General Hospital? You're one of the people responsible for making us fight here.	More references to Sacred Hope Hospital.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d091_m080_010	150	Takemaru: We were forced to undergo surgery at Sacred Hope, right? For the source of our hemoanima... That cryptoglobin stuff.	Takemaru: We were forced to undergo surgery at Kamukura, right? For the source of our hemoanima... That cryptoglobin stuff.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d091_m080_030	130	Nozomi: It's true, I was affiliated with Sacred Hope Hospital and my mom did work there.	Nozomi: It's true, I was affiliated with Kamukura General Hospital and my mom did work there.

Chapter 00_0-093 (Day 93)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d093_m050_010	540	They're already talking about what they'll do when they get back home. Aren't they worried about the deal we have to broker tomorrow?	They're already talking about what they'll do when they get back home. Aren't they worried about the deal we have to make tomorrow?	Odd word choice for Takumi here.

Chapter 00_0-095 (Day 95)#

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d095_m400_010	80	Darumi: He broke that device, too... And the kid with the Undying Flames is gone...	Darumi: He broke that device, too... And the guy with the Undying Flames is gone...	"Kid".
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d095_m400_010	740	PA System: Switching to reserve power supply. Restore system immediately.	PA System: Reserve power will soon be depleted. Restore system immediately.	The system is clearly on reserve power already.

File	Message ID	Early Line	Final Line	Notes
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d000_m010_040	130	Announcement: This is an administrative announcement. The complex's danger level has been raised to Amber Alert.	Announcement: This is an administrative announcement. All citizens, report to your nearest shelter until further notice.	The emergency alert that forces Takumi and Karua into the underground shelter. Changed for an obvious reason: Amber alert is the name of the child abduction alert system that started in the United States.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d000_m010_040	140	Announcement: All citizens, report to your nearest shelter until further notice.	Announcement: This is an administrative announcement. All citizens, report to your nearest shelter until further notice.
r00_0_1sttruer_00_d000_m030_040	140	Sirei: That knife is imbued with a veeery special power. Something far beyond your understanding.	Sirei: That dagger is imbued with a veeery special power. Something far beyond your understanding.	The Hematomorphic Infusion Blades (Infusers) are closer in appearance to daggers than knives. More of these changes exist in the script and are not included here.
	360	I picked up the knife and removed it from its sheath to get a proper look at it.	I picked up the dagger and removed it from its sheath to get a proper look at it.
	390	I took the knife in both hands, gritted my teeth against the incoming pain...	I took the dagger in both hands, gritted my teeth against the incoming pain...