g_chr002take_03

30

Takemaru: I dunno what kind of a-hole took it, but they've got guts messin' with a man's pudding.

Takemaru: I dunno what kind of asshole took it, but they've got guts messin' with a man's pudding.

Takemaru's Free Time event in the Cafeteria. Takemaru is definitely not one to censor himself.

g_chr007gaku_03

100

Since when is celebrating birthdays a hobby? This kid sure loves parties...

Since when is celebrating birthdays a hobby? This guy sure loves parties...

Gaku's Free Time event on the Roof. Another "kid" reference removed.

k_chr008ima_01

20

Ima: Why is everyone else here 17? Why are my dear sister and I the only middle schoolers?

Ima: Why are my dear sister and I the only middle schoolers?

Ima's first Bond Event. Part of keeping the ages of the students a bit more ambiguous and out of "kid" range. The first line's voice clip was patched to remove the first sentence, but the second line's voice clip does not match the text. The second line was changed back in Version 1.2.0.

k_chr011nozo_04

60

Nozomi: Oh, but I'll need to find someone who makes my heart flutter. I've never given anyone Valentine's chocolates before!

Nozomi: Oh, but I'll need to find someone who makes me excited for those festivals first. I've never given anyone Valentine's chocolates before!

Nozomi's fourth Bond Event.

npc_chr018sire_07_01

20

Sirei: After all, it is you kids fighting on the frontlines carry humanity's hopes and dreams.

Sirei: After all, it is you soldiers fighting on the frontlines, carrying humanity's hopes and dreams.

Part of one of Sirei's standard dialogues. Another "kid" removal. An example of one of the grammar fixes can also be seen.

s01_0_restartend_00_d100_m020_010

130

Sirei: I'll be on my way, then. Thanks for the memories, kids.

Sirei: I'll be on my way, then. Thanks for the memories, folks.

"Kid".

s04_0_ivachanr_00_d068_m010_010

270

I guess in her eyes, we were just child soldiers made to fight in a war they didn't fully understand.

I guess in her eyes, we were just misled soldiers made to fight in a war we didn't fully understand.

"Kid". "Child".

s05_0_ninshiki_00_d061_m030_010

410

When I let Eva out of her cage, she immediately began walking toward the school.

When I let Eva out of her cage, she immediately began walking toward the hallway.

It's possible that Eva's cage was originally outside the school instead of in the Courtyard on the second floor, though that change would drastically effect many routes. This line has an associated unused voice clip.

s07_0_panicxrt_00_d034_m040_015

240

Gotoh: That surviving is not a future worth sending such young children to fight for.

Gotoh: That surviving is not a future worth sending such young ones to fight for.

"Kid". "Child".

s07_0_panicxrt_a0_d034_m010_010

450

Gotoh: The children from the second campus received theirs when they arrived there. That campus has its own separate brainwashing device.

Gotoh: The students from the second campus received theirs when they arrived there. That campus has its own separate brainwashing device.

"Kid". "Child".

s07_0_panicxrt_aabaaaa_d036_m020_010

580

Gotoh: The memory experiments being conducted at Sacred Hope Hospital, and this school being filled with technology based on that research...

Gotoh: The memory experiments being conducted at Kamukura General Hospital, and this school being filled with technology based on that research...

Another reference to Sacred Hope Hospital.

s09_a_boukenrt_00_d026_m040_010

140

Kurara: I'm a child of the proud Oosuzuki family, nothing more, nothing less. Wait... Do you think he means Earthlings?

Kurara: I'm a member of the proud Oosuzuki family, nothing more, nothing less. Wait... Do you think he means Earthlings?

"Kid". "Child".

s09_a_boukenrt_a0_d064_m020_010,s09_a_boukenrt_b0_d064_m010_020

200

Yugamu: A sneak attack like this'd be right up his alley. I'm so giving him a special torture session when I get my hands on him.

Yugamu: A sneak attack like this'd be right up his alley. I wonder if he was able to take out his bomb all on his own...

An attempt to cover-up the plot hole of Eito destroying Sirei without being killed by the bomb implanted in him. Has an associated unused voice line.

s09_a_boukenrt_ab_d065_m030_010

60

Gaku: Uh... That's a good question. School kids, I guess? Students?

Gaku: Uh... That's a good question. Students, I guess?

"Kid."

s09_a_boukenrt_ab_d072_m150_010

130

Gaku: I know we're not exactly normal kids anymore, and if Kako says these boxes are important, it's probably true.

Gaku: I know we're not exactly normal students anymore, and if Kako says these boxes are important, it's probably true.

"Kid."

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70

Sirei: A new era will begin in humanity's history, and all of you will leave your marks as heroes in this chapter!

Sirei: A new era will begin in humanity's history, and all of you will be honored as heroes for generations to come!

Alternate wording for Sirei's announcement.

s09_a_boukenrt_ab_d099_m080_010

100

Hiruko: Aren't you the one who chickened out of opening them first, back when you had them all?

Hiruko: What are you prattling on about? You're the one who wasn't able to gather all the boxes.

There is no point on this branch where V'ehxness has all of the boxes in her possession.

s09_a_boukenrt_baa_d099_m180_010

245

[no line]

In order to stop the attack on this planet, we decided to head to the Defense Room.

A line added alluding to the final outcome of the war.

s09_a_boukenrt_bbb_d099_m010_010

15

[no line]

It seems the boxes themselves were made with some kind of special power, and couldn't be burned with regular flames...

A line added preventing the boxes from being destroyed normally.

s09_b_occultrt_20_d023_m010_010

260

Takumi: Let's get you to the Infirmary. Here, take my hand.

Takumi: Let's get you out of here so you can rest. Here, take my hand.

There's not really any reason to take Nozomi to the Infirmary specifically; it's not really an actual infirmary.

s09_b_occultrt_20_d025_m020_010

380

Takumi: Yeah. If you're watching the stairs, no one will be able to slip back up and rejoin the group.

Takumi: Yeah. If you're watching the stairs, we'll know if anyone goes up.

It would be a little weird to automatically limit the identity of the shadowy figures to members of the team, but they are checking to see if everyone is currently present where they're supposed to be, so this change is a bit odd.

s09_b_occultrt_20_d027_m040_010

110

Sirei: The story will never move forward if you don't look for evidence and expose the blackened!

Sirei: The story will never move forward if you don’t look for evidence and expose the truth behind it!

A shocking removal of a Danganronpa reference.

s09_b_occultrt_20_d033_m020_010

220

Sirei: What a little problem child we've got on our hands.

Sirei: What a little troublemaker we've got on our hands.

"Kid". "Child".

s09_b_occultrt_20_d040_m030_010

60

Sirei: He's gone beyond being a mere problem child at this point.

Sirei: He's gone beyond being a mere troublemaker at this point.

"Kid". "Child".

s09_b_occultrt_a0_d058_m010_010

850

Hiruko: I'm not the kind of person who could kill a child just because they'd grow up to be a murderer.

Hiruko: I'm not the kind of person who could kill someone just because they'd grow up to be a murderer.

"Kid". "Child". To be fair, Kako is younger than the others.

s09_b_occultrt_b0_d058_m010_010

530

Eva: But you're all... Well, you're just a bunch of kids. You're being made to fight by forces beyond your control.

Eva: But you're all... Well, you're just a bunch of students. You're being made to fight by forces beyond your control.

"Kid". (And "child".)

s09_b_occultrt_ba_d073_m040_010

70

Nozomi: He came for me while I was asleep.

Nozomi: That happened while I was sleeping.

Ima came after Takumi, not Nozomi.

s09_b_occultrt_bba_d092_m030_010

415

[no line]

Now that I think about it, Sirei did say he implanted a bomb inside Nozomi's body...

Sirei's explanation for Nozomi having a bomb inside her body this route (which is not the case in the other routes, but is essentially required for events in this one) was likely added at some point in development.

s09_b_occultrt_bb_d080_m010_010

220

Eva: I don't want to see the friendships of you children fall apart.

Eva: I don't want to see the friendships of you all fall apart.

"Kid". "Child".

s09_b_occultrt_bb_d083_m010_010

120

To keep me from worrying about it. To keep the responsibility off of us kids.

To keep me from worrying about it. To keep the responsibility off of us students.

"Kid".

s10_a_yakusitk_00_d017_m020_010

150

And about sneaking into a spare machine in Sacred Hope Hospital to get sent here...

And about sneaking into a spare machine in Kamukura General Hospital to get sent here...

More references to Sacred Hope Hospital.

s10_a_yakusitk_00_d050_m020_010

100

Hiruko: It's his punishment for talking to the Undying Flames kid against your will. Those who disappoint you must be punished.

Hiruko: It's his punishment for talking to the boy with the Undying Flames against your will. Those who disappoint you must be punished.

"Kid".

s11_0_seisyunr_00_d012_m050_010

160

Sacred Hope Hospital. The cryptoglobin transfusions. The rejection symptoms. Her mother's suicide. The way she joined the mission by sneaking into a spare pod...

Kamukura General Hospital. The cryptoglobin transfusions. The rejection symptoms. Her mother's suicide. The way she joined the mission by sneaking into a spare pod...

Another reference to Sacred Hope Hospital.

s11_0_seisyunr_a0_d014_m020_010

70

She told them about the cryptoglobin transfusion she'd undergone at Sacred Hope Hospital... And how it had failed, meaning she wasn't chosen for the Special Defense Unit.

She told them about the cryptoglobin transfusion she'd undergone at Kamukura General Hospital... And how it had failed, meaning she wasn't chosen for the Special Defense Unit.

More references to Sacred Hope Hospital.

s11_0_seisyunr_aaa_d065_m010_010

140

Takumi: I AM a child! I'm still in school!

Takumi: I'm still in school!

"Child". This line has an associated voice line change.

s12_0_fantasyr_00_d008_m010_010

50

Tsubasa: What's going to happen to the kids at this academy, though?

Tsubasa: What's going to happen to everyone at this academy, though?

"Kid".

s12_0_fantasyr_00_d010_m030_010

190

Ima: Whether we live or die is all up to you, Mr. Sumino. Just like what happened with the kids from the other academy.

Ima: Whether we live or die is all up to you, Mr. Sumino. Just like what happened with the group from the other academy.

"Kid".

s12_0_fantasyr_00_d015_m280_010

160

Takumi: Are you doing this for the kids from the other academy?

Takumi: Are you doing this for the members from the other academy?

"Kid".

s12_0_fantasyr_a0_d052_m030_010

120

Kako: She sounds more like a grandma than a teenager. The kids from the second campus all sound pretty interesting.

Kako: She sounds more like a grandma than a teenager. The members from the second campus all sound pretty interesting.

"Kid".

s12_0_fantasyr_a0_d054_m010_010

80

I guess I can't handle my alcohol... When I'm old enough to drink, I'm staying away from the stuff.

I guess I can't handle my alcohol... After today, I don't think I'll touch the stuff ever again.

The drinking age in Japan is 20 (though it's possibly different under Tokyo Residential Complex law) and this one doesn't explicitly call him a minor, so this change is maybe being a little too careful.

s12_0_fantasyr_a0_d087_m140_010

40

Dahl'xia: This is no battle. And I have no desire to indulge children throwing tantrums.

Dahl'xia: This is no battle. And I have no desire to indulge those throwing tantrums like children.

"Child".

s13_0_sftolove_00_d003_m060_010

310

Hiruko: I promise.

Hiruko: Yes...

Hiruko probably shouldn't explicitly promise something under the condition of "if I don't change my mind before then". Especially when she does change her mind. And especially when she says she doesn't "remember making any such promise".

s13_0_sftolove_00_d005_m080_010

40

Something vaguely human shaped, in a white suit of some kind.

Something vaguely human-shaped, under a white sheet.

The bodies in the Morgue were apparently originally in some sort of suit rather than under a tarp.

70

The thing in the suit...turned over.

And pulled it off.

s13_0_sftolove_00_d007_m070_010

170

??? (Shion): Approximately 1.08 miles.

??? (Shion): 1.05 miles.

A correction in math regarding Shion's example of small deviations causing big changes over time using rockets traveling different paths through space. The arc length of a 1 degree angle with a radius of 60 miles is π/3 miles, or roughly 1.047 miles. This is technically along the lines of a spelling/grammar fix, but it is amusing that the original text says "approximately" while the final text does not...despite still being a more accurate approximation.

s13_a_sfsfsfsf_00_d021_m100_010

220

Hiruko: You look like an akebia fruit that's been taken out of the refrigerator and left to sit in the sun.

Hiruko: You look like a peeled banana that's been sitting out in the sun.

This simile was changed to a more reasonably well-known fruit.

s13_a_sfsfsfsf_00_d022_m030_010

140

In that moment, my face probably looked like an akebia that had been in the sun too long.

In that moment, my face probably looked like a peeled banana that had been in the sun too long.

See above.

s13_a_sfsfsfsf_00_d030_m030_010

30

The first part of the day came and went, and Hiruko and I came to a stop in our work.

Evening had already arrived... Hiruko and I stopped searching for books and regrouped.

Takumi and Hiruko's search for the library lasts for nearly the entire day.

s13_a_sfsfsfsf_00_d031_m060_010

120

Eito, Gaku, Darumi, Kurara, Eva, and Hiruko IV were nowhere to be seen. I knew about four of them, but...

Eito, Gaku, Darumi, Kurara, Eva, and Hiruko IV were nowhere to be seen. Of them, there were two whose absences I couldn't explain...

The focus is more on the two unknowns (Darumi and Kurara) than the other four.

520

Actually, it wasn't so strange when you considered I was out cold before I had the chance to feel anything...

Because before I could even feel it...my consciousness suddenly...faded away...