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This page details one or more prototype versions of Phantasy Star II.

General Text#

File Select#

Only two messages changed on this screen, both relating to save file corruption.

Early Script

Final Script

Context

Ok. I was able to fix
the problem.

Ok, I was able to fix
the problem.

Fixing a corrupted save file.

I'm sorry, I can't seem
to fix things right.
Game can not be
played.

I'm sorry, I can't seem
to fix things right.
Game cannot be
played.

Unable to fix corrupted file.

Field Messages#

Mostly just finding items and using techniques outside of battle.

Early Script

Final Script

Context

There seems to be
nothing strange about
it
.

There seems to be
nothing unusual here.

Looking at nothing.

uses .

uses ....

Using an item.

touchs 's
wounds; the wounds are
healed.

touches 's
wounds. The wounds are
healed.

Using a RES tech.

touchs ;
is cured of the poison.

touches ;
is cured of the poison.

Using ANTI.

touchs 's
cheek; comes back
to life!

touches 's
cheek; comes back
to life!

Using REVER.

touchs 's
wounds.
But the poison still
remains; can't be
healed.

touches 's
wounds.
But the poison still
remains; can't be
healed.

Failing to use ANTI.

doesn't want to
takes .

doesn't want to
take .

Trying to equip Nei
with an invalid item.

has gooten hold of
.

has gotten hold of
.

Looting a treasure chest.

It's locked and wouldn't
open.

It's locked and won't
open.

Inspecting a locked chest.

But, they can't hold
any more.

But they can't hold
any more.

Looting a treasure chest
with a full inventory.

can't let go of the
item!.

can't let go of the
item!

Trying to drop PLASMARING.

Battle Messages#

They probably should have expanded the battle message box from one line to two lines. Oh well.

Early Script

Final Script

Context

has gone
insame!

has gone
insane!

???

is
paralyzed!

is
paralyzed!

Character is paralyzed.

gains a level
HP at maximum!
TP at maximum!

gains a level.
New HP maximum!
New TP maximum!

Gaining a level.

turns greedy
and searches the
other' items!

turns greedy
and searches the
others' items!

Corrupted by Dark Force.

turns
doubtful!
fight less
furiously!

turns
doubtful!
fights less
furiously!

Corrupted by Dark Force.

loses
comfidence!
can't use
any techniques!

loses
confidence!
can't use
any techniques!

Corrupted by Dark Force.

Item Use Messages#

Most important items have unique use messages. That was nice of them.

Early Script

Final Script

Context

The noted said;
"Daram! I have your
daughter Teim locked in
Nido tower. Pay 50000
meseta in one month if
you ever want to see her
again,"
To get the money, Daram
turned to crime.

The note said;
"Darum! I have your
daughter Teim locked in
Nido tower. Pay 50,000
meseta in one month if
you ever want to see her
again,"
To get the money, Darum
turned to crime.

Using LETTER.

If this can be delivered
to Paseo, we will know
what caused the
biohazards.

If this can be delivered
to Paseo, we will know
what caused the
Biohazards.

Using RECORDER.

It is a metal pole,
20CM long,with markings.

It is a metal pole,
20cm long,with markings.

Using KEY TUBE.

The party eats
MARUERAGUM. With each
bite, everyone's mouth
fills with air!
Could help under water..

The party eats
MARUERAGUM. With each
bite, everyone's mouth
fills with air!
Could help underwater..

Using MARUERAGUM above Climatrol.

Item Names#

Most of these changes are just removing the periods from abbreviated names, i.e. "SIL.RIBBON" to "SIL RIBBON".

Proto

Final

Proto

Final

Significant Changes

The Other Ones

YELLO CARD

YELLOWCARD

MRURA.LEAF

MRURA LEAF

ANTIDONE

ANTIDOTE

SIL.RIBBON

SIL RIBBON

SANBALS

SANDALS

SIL.RIBBON

SIL RIBBON

LASERSHOES1

SHOES

SIL.CROWN

SIL CROWN

LASERBOOTS1

BOOTS

JWL.CROWN

JWL CROWN

CANON

CANNON

JWL.RIBBON

JWL RIBBON

YOUR

AD

HERE

TTNM.ARMOR

TTNM ARMOR

TTNM.CAPE

TTNM CAPE

TTNM.CHEST

TTNM CHEST

CRMC.ARMOR

CRMC ARMOR

CRMC.CAPE

CRMC CAPE

CRMC.CHEST

CRMC CHEST

CRBN.EMEL

CRBN EMEL

GMIR.SHILD

GMIR SHILD

VMIR.EMEL

VMIR EMEL

TCER.SHIELD

TCER SHIELD

CER.EMEL

CER EMEL

VGR.SLEEVES

VGR SLEEVES

LACON.EMEL

LACON EMEL

CERAM.SWRD

CERAM SWRD

CERAM.KNFE

CERAM KNFE

CERAM.BAR

CERAM BAR

LASR.SLSHR

LASR SLSHR

LASR.SWRD

LASR SWRD

LASR.BAR

LASR BAR

VALACN.MACE

VALACN MACE

LAC.DAGGER

LAC DAGGER

LAC.SLASHR

LAC SLASHR

LAC.SWORD

LAC SWORD

LSR.CANNON

LSR CANNON

PLS.CANNON

PLS CANNON

PRSN.CLTHS

PRSN CLTHS

1 The translator likely confused レザー ("leather") with レーザー ("laser"). It doesn't help that there are a number of other laser items in the game, but only two leather items.

Enemy Names#

'...But does it make sense?'
The translations on this page need to be proofread. If you are fluent enough in this language, please make any corrections necessary!

All enemy names in the prototype are close approximations of the Japanese names, though some of them have been mistranslated. The 8-character limit makes a lot of these names incomprehensible, which is probably why they were changed.

It seems whoever wrote the new names was confused too, which is how "LVNG.BLD" became "LUNG" and "HVY.SOLD" became "HVYSOLID".

Japanese

Translation

Proto

Final

バイテングアント

Biting Ant

BTNG.ANT

FIRE ANT

アームドアント

Armored Ant

ARMD.ANT

ARMORANT

パンツァアント

Panzer Ant

BNTZ.ANT

PINCHANT

ギガモスキート

Giga Mosquito

LAG.MOSQ

WASPY

グランモスキート

Grand Mosquito

GNT.MOSQ

STINGER

スピニンスフィア

Spinning Sphere

SPIN.SPH

SPINNER

ファンシスフィア

Fancy Sphere

FNCY.SPH

VORTEX

ビジョンスフィア

Vision Sphere

VISN.SPH

WHIRLY

フェンサー

Fencer

FENCER

BEE

マスタフェンサー

Master Fencer

MSTR.FNC

BUZZER

エムゴフェンサー

M5 Fencer

EMG.FNCR

INSECTA

ポイズンドアロー

Poison Arrow

PSN.ARRW

SPITKILL

ポイズンファング

Poison Fang

PSN.FANG

SPITFANG

フライングペドラ

Flying Pedra

FLYNG.PD

HIT TAIL

センチペドラ

Centipedra

CENT.PDR

CENTER

グリディペドラ

Greedy Pedra

GRDY.PDR

SCALY

リッカー

Licker

LICKER

FROGGY

フェイスリッカー

Face Licker

FACE.LKR

TOADER

スカルリッカー

Skull Licker

SKULL.LK

SQUAT

チョーキンロット

Choking Rot

CHKG.ROT

MUSHROOM

ラストロット

Last Rot

LAST ROT

HEAD ROT

グラスキラー

Grass Killer

GRS.KILR

LOCUST

グラスアサッシン

Grass Assassin

GRS.ASSN

LOCUSTA

グラススロータラ

Grass Slaughterer

GRS.SLGT

FANBITE

シュライムゼレ

Slime Jelly

SLME.JLY

JELLY

ミキサメーベ

Mix Amoebae

MIKISAM

SLUGMESS

ポリツァイ

Polizei

POLIZEI

POLEZI

ポリツァイAX

Polizei AX

POLIZ.AX

POLEZIAX

ポリツァイSS

Polizei SS

POLIZ.SS

POLEZISS

ヒルド

Hirudo

HILD

LEECHER

ベリッチリーチ

Belchy Leech

BRCH.LCH

FANG

ボミテングリーチ

Vomiting Leech

BMTG.LCH

PYTHON

バスカバー

Bath Cover

BATH.CVR

PULSER

マンカバー

Man Cover

MAN COVR

BLASTER

プラネットカバー

Planet Cover

PLNT.CVR

BLASTOID

デッドウッド

Deadwood

DEADWOOD

ROT WOOD

フェイリア

Feria(?)

FEIRIA

FIRIA

ブリザーダ

Blizzarda(?)

BRISADA

WOLFANG

シーシザーズ

Sea Scissors

SHISHIZA

PUG HIT

シーシア

Sea Shears

SHISHIA

PUG BRAT

シーシアロード

Sea Shears Lord

SHISHIAR

PUG KILL

デホ

Deho

DEHO

WIREFACE

ホズイトデホ

Hozuito Deho

HOSUDEHO

WIREHEAD

イッポデホ

Ippo Deho

IPPODEHO

POD HEAD

カイトカインド

Kite Kind

KITEKIND

TERAKITE

レプタイルカイト

Reptile Kite

RPTLKITE

REPTILE

ネオカイトニア

Neo Caytonia

NEOKITON

FIRE EYE

ネオカイトニア

Neo Nilssonia

NEONIRUS

GLOWSTIK

ネオベネティテス

Neo Bennettites

NEOVENET

FOREST

アイルーロス

Ailuros

AIRUROS

CATMAN

リュンクス

Lynx

RYUNKS

CATFANG

パンテーラ

Panthera

PANTELLA

CATEYE

サットマン

Sat Man

SATTMAN

MECHOMAN

サットボーイ

Sat Boy

SATTBOY

SONOMECH

サットサット

Sat Sat

SATTSATT

ATTMECH

ミゾランガンマ

Mizoran Gamma

MZRGAMMA

MAZGAMMA

ミゾランシグマ

Mizoran Sigma

MZRSIGMA

FIRGAMMA

ミゾランオメガ

Mizoran Omega

MZROMEGA

KILGAMMA

バンブー

Bamboo

BAMBOO

METALMAN

バンブートウィグ

Bamboo Twig

BAM.TWIG

TWIG MAN

バンブードール

Bamboo Doll

BAM.DOLL

TWIGTALL

サボキャップ

Servo Cap

SERVOCAP

MONSTER

ミネラロジスト

Mineralogist

MINRLGST

LRGMINER

ヘビーソルジャー

Heavy Soldier

HVY.SOLD

HVYSOLID

グランバスター

Grand Buster

GND.BUST

GUN BUST

ポリンスペクター

Polinspector

PLNSPCTR

SPECTER

アイレティーア

Airitia(?)

AIRETIA

AEROTANK

ハングリーエイプ

Hungry Ape

HGRY.APE

ORANGAH

ラスカルモンキー

Rascal Monkey

RSCL.MKY

ORANGOO

ドロールモンキー

Droll Monkey

DRLL.MKY

OHX

ネオマンモス

Neo Mammoth

NEOMAMTH

MASTODON

ネオビッグノーズ

Neo Big-Nose

NEOBIG.

ELETUSK

デゾリアマンモス

Dezolian Mammoth

DEZ.MMTH

ELEPHANT

アウルデゾリア

Owl Dezolian

OWL.DEZO

DEZO OWL

マレフィックアイ

Malefic Eye

MAREFIK

OWLTALON

ダーティアンゴラ

Dirty Angora

DRTY.ANG

RABBIT

スポイルラビット

Spoiled Rabbit

SPL.RBBT

RABBITA

スニフィラビット

Sniffy Rabbit

SNF.RBBT

RABITGUT

ムソオル

Musol

MUSOL

WRESTLER

サコフ

Sakov

SAKOF

SAKOFF

モソロフ

Mosolov

MOSOROF

MESOMAN

リビングブレード

Living Blade

LVNG.BLD

LUNG

クライブリンガー

Cry Bringer

CRY BRGR

GLOSWORD

デスロウナー

Death Rouna(?)

DTH.INVR

MR DEATH

シェイドシフター

Shade Shifter

SHD.SHFT

SHADOW

カオスソーサラー

Chaos Sorceror

SRC.CHAO

MYSTCAPE

ドラゴンダウト

Dragon Doubt

DRGN.DAT

FRDRAGON

ドラゴンヘイト

Dragon Hate

DRGN.HTE

MXDRAGON

ファイアレムレス

Fire Lemures

FIRE.LEM

FIREFALL

ストームレムレス

Storm Lemures

STORMLEM

VORCANO

キングレムレス

King Lemures

KING LEM

KINGLAVA

ダ。ケムル。ラー

Da-Kemel-Ra

KEMEL RA

WIZARD

ルン。フィン。ガ

Run-Fin-Ga

RUN FIN

CAPEONE

ギ。ル。ザーク

Gi-Ru-Zaku

GI RU ZA

FIEND

ダークファルス 1

Dark Force

DARK FRC

DARKFRCE

マザーブレイン 1

Mother Brain

MTHR.BRN

MOMBRAIN

1 Not actually used in-game.

Technique Names#

"MUZIK" was changed to "MUSIK" in the final version. That's all.

Home#

The final version has an extra line in the "Changing party members" dialogue. This was probably meant to be the exit dialogue, but it was never linked properly. This isn't the last time the final version adds a line like this.

Early Script

Final Script

Context

Ahh, home at last. But
there's no time to
relax! Before you go out
again, you better check
your companions.

Ahh, home at last. But
there's no time to
relax! Before you go out
again, you'd better
check your companions.

Intro.

Let's see how many
members there are, and
if we want to regroup.
Who should we take into
the party?

Let's see how many
members there are, and
if we want to regroup.
Well, let's get going.
Who should we take into
the party?

Changing party members.

is a member, and
that makes four. Let's
start the journey!

is a member, and
that makes four.
Let's start the journey!

Recruiting the fourth member.

Character Intros#

In the prototype, five of the eight playable characters keep their original Japanese names. The three characters already changed are Rolf (originally Eusis), Kain (shortened from Kainz), and Hugh (Huey). There are also other minor changes to each character's introduction.

Early Script

"I'm sorry to intrude,
but I have heard that
and Nei are looking
to solve the mystery of
the biomonsters. I am a
professional biomonster
hunter. I have little
talent, except that I am
good with a gun.
I also want to go with
you. My name is Rudo,
short for Rudoga
Steiner
. Maybe you
think you know a better
name for me?"

Final Script

I'm sorry to intrude,
but I have heard that
and Nei are looking
to solve the mystery of
the Biomonsters. I am a
professional Biomonster
hunter. I have little
talent, except that I am
good with a gun.
I also want to go with
you. My name is Rudo,
which is short for
Rudolf Steiner. Maybe
you think you know a
better name for me?

Early Script

"How do you do? I am Dr.
Annu Saga; I heard that
you are seeking to
solve the mystery of the
biomonsters? I will be
glad to assist you; I am
not much of a fighter,
but
I can heal wounds.
Give me a new name, if
you wish, as a sigh of
closeness."

Final Script

How do you do? I am Dr.
Amy Sage. I heard that
you are seeking to
solve the mystery of the
Biomonsters. I will be
glad to assist you,
though
I am not much of
a fighter.
But,
I can heal wounds.
Give me a new name, if
you wish, as a sign of
closeness.

Early Script

"How do you do, . I
am Hugh Linn, a
biologist. I came when
I heard about your
quest. I value all
life, including
biomonsters.
I am willing to fight
to defend weaker life
forms, though. Perhaps
my knowledge will be of
help to you. I will feel
like we are good friends
if you give me a
nickname."

Final Script

How do you do, . I
am Hugh Thompson, a
Biologist. I came when
I heard about your
quest. I value all
life, including
Biomonsters.
I am willing to fight
to defend weaker life
forms, though. Perhaps
my knowledge will be of
help to you. I will feel
like we are good friends
if you give me a
nickname.

Early Script

"I have long waited to
meet you. I am Amia
Amirski
. I am known as
a guardian. Although
most hunter are good,
some have gone bad; I
track then down."
My job is to hunt evil
hunters,but I can hunt
anything! I dislike
guns, but give me a
weapon with a blade, and
I am deadly! I can help
you. Yes, give me a new
name and I forget
the past and concentrate
on the present..."

Final Script

I have long waited to
meet you. I am Anna
Zirski
. I am known as
a guardian. Although
most hunters are good,
some have gone bad; I
track them down.
My job is to hunt evil
hunters,but I can hunt
anything! I dislike
guns, but give me a
weapon with a blade, and
I am deadly! I can help
you. Yes, give me a new
name and I can forget
the past and concentrate
on the present...

Early Script

"Howja do? I'se glad ta
see ya. Yup, I been
heard you goin' out
after them bad'uns; I
kin help ya. I ain't
much fer them slimy
critters,but...
if any machines or
robots git in yer way, I
kin bust'em up real
good! My birthin' name
be Kain G. Ahn.
Watsamatta? Don'cha
think tha's a good
name?"

Final Script

Howja do? I'se glad ta
see ya. Yup, I done
heard you goin' out
after them bad'uns; I
kin help ya. I ain't
much fer them slimy
critters,but...
if any machines or
robots git in yer way, I
kin bust'em up real
good! My birthin' name
be Josh Kain.
Watsamatta? Don'cha
think tha's a good
name?

Early Script

"Hello, . You are
just as handsome as they
say. I am Shir Lavinia.
I am a thief. I care
little for peace and
justice. I steal for
fun; and frankly, I
think your little outing
will be packed with
thrills for me.
I think I'd like to go
with you. Remember, I'm
Shir of the wind!
Nothing can catch me! Do
you want me to come with
you? What, you want to
give me a new name?"

Final Script

Hello, . You are
just as handsome as they
say. I am Shir Gold.
I am a thief. I care
little for peace and
justice. I steal for
fun; and frankly, I
think your little outing
will be packed with
thrills for me.
I think I'd like to go
with you. Remember, I'm
Shir of the wind!
Nothing can catch me! Do
you want me to come with
you? What, you want to
give me a new name?

Stores#

Clone Labs#

Making death a minor inconvenience, except when it isn't.

Early Script

Final Script

Context

It will cost MST.
Will you pay?

It will cost
meseta.
Will you pay?

Selecting a person to clone.

All right, here you go!

All right, here you go.

Exiting.

Data Memory#

Note the line added to the save text in the final version. This was probably meant to be displayed after selecting "YES" when asked if you want to adventure some more. Instead, the line is always displayed after saving, and both "YES" and "NO" give the same message.

Early Script

Final Script

Context

needs
points to go up a level.

needs points
to go up a level.

Intro text.

it is not possible
for you to gain anymore
levels!

it is not possible
for you to gain any more
levels!

Intro text (Max level).

We already have data
saved under that number;
is it ok to erase it?

We already have data
saved under that number.
Is it OK to erase it?

Saving in used save slot.

All memories and
experiences saved.
Are you going to go on
and
adventure some more?

All memories and
experiences saved.
Are you going to
adventure some more?
I see. Well, good luck!

Game saved.

Ok, good-bye then.

Ok, good-bye, then.

Choosing not to continue.

Be carefull out there!

Be careful out there!

Exiting.

Hospital#

Because sleep is for the weak.

Early Script

Final Script

Context

It will cost Mst
to care you. Will you
pay?

It will cost Meseta
to care for you.

Healing prompt.

I see; Well, then, take
care and good day.

I see; well, then, take
care and good day.

Exiting.

Teleport Station#

Now 100% Brundlefly-proof!

Early Script

Final Script

Context

If you know the name of
a town, you can use our
service.

If you know the name of
a town, you can use our
service!

Intro (No towns visited).

What town do you want to
teleport to?

Where would you like
to teleport?

Intro.

Item Shop#

Not that interesting.

Early Script

Final Script

Context

Welcome, how may I be of
service?

Welcome. how may I be of
service?

Intro.

Piano Man#

The music teacher has a different name and sexual orientation in the proto script.

Early Script

Final Script

Context

I am Urbanchin, a
musician. Do you want
to hear me play?

I am Ustvestia, a
musician. Do you want
to hear me play?

Intro

Hey, he's kinda cute.
I'll give lessons for
2000 meseta.

Hey, he looks smart.
I'll give lessons for
2000 meseta.

Prompt to teach male party member.

Kueri Inventor#

Seeker of leaves.

Early Script

Final Script

Context

There is a MARUERA TREE
on an island in the sea
on Mota. The leaves
of that tree produce a
large amount of oxygen;
I want to use the leaves
to make a special gum
that lets you breathe
under water!

There is a MARUERA TREE
on an island in the sea.
The leaves of that tree
produce a large amount
of oxygen; I want to
use the leaves to make
a special gum that lets
you breathe underwater!

Asking about Maruera Leaves.

That's it! A MARUERA
LEAF! Please give it to
me!

That's it; A MARUERA
LEAF! Please give it to
me!

Intro (With MARUERALEAF).

That's too bad. Well,
then, good-bye!

That's too bad. Well
then, good-bye!

Refusing to give MARUERALEAF.