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Vagabond

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This is a sub-page of Proto:Shining Force III/May 8th, 1998 prototype.

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Whoo! Yea yea! Army! Army!
That battle just now was incredible!
My heart was beating real fast!

Whoo! Yea! Army! Hi, I'm JJ!
That battle was exciting! Now I can't
keep still! Ai laaaaaaate!

It appears Text Editor Jeff Junio rewrote this scene to insert himself.

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Final

The guardian statue beyond the eastern
mountain is a statue made out of gold.
If a statue was left in such a place,
you'd expect a thief would steal it,
but that thing has stood there forever.

The Guardian Statue beyond the eastern
mountain is a statue made out of gold.
If a statue was left in such a place,
you'd expect a thief would steal it,
but it has stood there forever.

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Final

The topography of Barrand is complex.
It is very difficult
to mount an offensive attack via land.
General Rogan's plan was ingenious.
Advancing from the sea in the Seagate,
he seized Barrand in one fell swoop.

The topography of Barrand is complex.
It is very difficult to mount an offensive
attack via land.
General Rogan's plan was ingenious.
Advancing from the sea in the Seagate,
he seized Barrand in one fell swoop.

Different line break.

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Final

I will talk some sense into...
the Lord Edmund. Please...
allow me to join your army.

I will talk some sense into
Lord Edmund. Please...
allow me to join your army.

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Final

Whoo! Yea! Army! Army!
Did you just return from a war?
That sounds so cool! I love the army!

Whoo! Yea! Army! It's me again. You
just returned from a war? That's cool!
Gotta go! Ai laaaaaaate!

Jeff Junlo strikes again.

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Still, that is not a good excuse
to leave the injured behind and hurry
along to pursue one's objectives.
The Republic ideology stress fairness,
but the actions of it's army is
no different than that of the Empire.

Still, that is not a good excuse
to leave the injured behind and hurry
along to pursue one's objectives.
Republic ideology stresses fairness,
but the actions of its army is
no different than that of the Empire.

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Final

My liege King Benetram, and...
Sir {Dantares} also from Flagard.

My Liege King Benetram, and...
Sir {Dantares} also from Flagard.

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Final

Yes? You must like cheese omelets, too.
Wait there,
and I'll cook it right away!

Yes? You like cheese omelets, too?
Wait there,
and I'll cook it right away!

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Final

Oh, you already have too many things
... why don't you eat with me instead?
If you cannot carry it, it's of no use to you.

Oh, you already have too many things
... why don't you eat it with me instead?
If you cannot carry it,
it's of no use to you.

A line break was added.

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Final

Recently, Saraband merchants have
been doing better business than us.
This time around though,
we made a lot of sales in Aspia.
Now with the Arrawnt army ashore, I
know there will be a run on supplies.
I can just see Garvin's face in agony!

Recently, Saraband merchants have been
doing better than us. This time though,
we made a lot of sales in Aspia.
Now with the Arrawnt army ashore, I
know there will be a run on supplies.
I can just see Garvin's face in agony!

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Final

What is this...this dark power...
Strong.... and terrifying!

What is this... this dark power...?
Strong.... and terrifying!

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Final

{Julian} is{05}in the rapids
under the waterfall. We must rescue
him quickly, his life is in danger!

{Julian} is{05} in the rapids
under the waterfall. We must rescue
him quickly, his life is in danger!

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Final

Edmund... loses his right hand man,
and Elbesem... losing its guardian....
So many problems....

Edmund... loses his right hand man,
and Elbesem... losing its guardian...
So many problems...