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Flagard

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X5BTL119.BIN#

(Aspinia East Plains)

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Who... who are you... where are you...
Damn you... how dare you speak
of me so!!''

Who... who are you...? Where
are you...? Damn you...
How dare you speak of me so!!

A small pause was added after "who are you...?" and "Where are you...?".

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Oh dear, how sad. I seem to have intruded.
Well, then I shall be on my way...

Oh dear, how sad... I seem to have intruded.
Well, then I shall be on my way...

X5RINO.BIN#

(Flagard)

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We have returned,
but the town is in terrible shape...

We have returned, but
the town is in terrible shape...

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I asked the remaining soldiers to investigate,
but the entrance is locked... there's
no way to know what's going on inside.

I sent some soldiers to investigate,
but the entrance is locked... there's
no way to know what's going on inside.

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Please try to remember, Reverend... This is
the biggest crisis Flagard has seen since the
Republican civil war!

Please try to remember, Reverend... This
is the biggest crisis Flagard has seen
since the Republican civil war!

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Ah! Lord Conrad and I once had a
conversation long ago. He
had put Republican emblems everywhere, as
he said the emblem represented the
Republic's goal of learning the secret
to equality and harmony.

Ah! Lord Conrad and I once had a
conversation long ago. He
had put Republican emblems everywhere, as
he said the emblem represented the
Republic's goal of learning the
secret to equality and harmony.

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But... You're giving this to us...
Don't you need this when you go to
the (Medion) army?

But... You're giving this to
us... Don't you need this
when you go to (Medion) army?

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Please don't worry.
I got it at Elbesem, so
please feel free to take it with you.

Please don't worry... I got
it at Elbesem, so please feel
free to take it with you.

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Hmm... The other side....
has many things to deal with... We're
not the only ones with heavy burdens...

Hmm... The others... have many
things to deal with... We're not the
only ones with heavy burdens...

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If Bulzome is heading for Duke Palsis,
we should be chasing after them.
...Um...What are we to do?

If the Bulzome are heading for Duke
Palsis, we should be chasing
after them... Um... What should we do?

X5BALSHP.BIN#

(Flagard Church)

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During Fafhard's invasion of Flagard,
out of nowhere,a group of monks
wearing masks appeared in town...
Some citizens ran home to avoid the
terror, and yet others took refuge
inside the church to pray for safety.

During Fafhard's invasion of Flagard,
out of nowhere, a group of monks
wearing masks appeared in town...
Some citizens ran home to avoid the
terror, and yet others took refuge
inside here to pray for safety.

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My grandpa couldn't run, and
got lost in the commotion...
Have you seen grandpa anywhere?

Grandpa couldn't run, and
got lost in the commotion...
Have you seen grandpa anywhere?

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Did you really?Knowing grandpa, I
knew he would find a way to survive.
Once, grandpa broke his leg while in a
forest, and came across a bear...
He survived by playing dead!
He must've done the same thing again.

Did you really? Knowing grandpa, I
knew he would find a way to survive.
Once, grandpa broke his leg while in a
forest, and came across a bear...
He survived by playing dead!
He must've done the same thing again.

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Hurrah! Lord (Synbios) has returned!
Since uncle (Dantares) is with you,
everything will be all right!
They have gone into the castle,
so find them and
pound them into the ground!

Hurrah! Lord (Synbios) has returned!
Since uncle (Dantares) is with you,
everything will be all right!
They have gone into the castle,
so find them and pound them
into the ground!

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It's the masked monks and monsters...
These monks do not praise Elbesem, but
smell as if they worship darkness.

It's the masked monks and monsters...
These monks do not praise Elbesem, but
smell as if they worship darkness.

A space was removed from "but" and "smell".

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I asked the remaining soldiers to investigate,
but the entrance is locked... there's
no way to know what's going on inside.

I sent some soldiers to investigate,
but the entrance is locked... there's
no way to know what's going on inside.

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It feels like the whole town has
stopped functioning.
Apparently Lord Conrad's passing
has affected the majority
of the towns people.

It feels like the whole town has
stopped functioning.
Apparently, Lord Conrad's passing
has affected the majority
of the town's people.

X5RINO_2.BIN#

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Of course, I still believe in
Elbesem... But, I wonder how the death
of Lord Conrad can be within his will...?
He dedicated his life to the Republic,
so he should have been protected.
He was a truly a great man...

Of course, I still believe in
Elbesem... But, I wonder how the death
of Lord Conrad can be within his will...?
He dedicated his life to the Republic,
so he should have been protected.
He was truly a great man...

"a" and "truly" were swapped around.

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(Synbios) read the writing on
the stone...
The writing on the stone says that a
strange animal might occasionally
appear from the hole on the rock.

(Synbios) read the writing on
the stone...
The writing on the stone says that a
strange animal occasionally appears
from the hole in the rock.

X5RINOIN.BIN#

(No Changes.)

X5BTL120.BIN#

(In Flagard Castle)

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I would love to stay and entertain you
but please accept these fine
fellows in my stead.

I would love to stay and entertain
you but please accept these
fine fellows in my stead.

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Damn your eyes, you intend to escape!
Where do you plan to slink
off to next?!

Damn your eyes, you intend
to escape! Where do you
plan to slink off to next?!

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To visit yet another annoyance that
must be dealt with.... Palsis.
We need to talk.

To visit yet another annoyance
that must be dealt with...
Palsis. We need to talk.

A small pause was added after "with...". All 3 had their line breaks messed with.

X5FURA.BIN#

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! !

! ! ! ! !

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From what I can tell
with a quick glance...
it seems the Bulzome Sect is not here.

From what I can tell with a
quick glance... it seems the
Bulzome Sect is not here.

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I was fooled by Fiale's words,
and had some doubts about Lord Conrad.
But now, I know he isn't that way.

I was fooled by Fiale's words, and
had some doubts about Lord Conrad...
But now, I know he isn't that way.

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There is no need to worry, (Synbios).
Before he died, Fafhard's words did
create a bit of mistrust in my mind...
But from what I can tell by judging
the mood of the town, it doesn't seems
possible he's conspiring with Bulzome.

There is no need to worry, Lord (Synbios).
Before he died, Fafhard's words did
create a bit of mistrust in my mind...
But from what I can tell by judging
the mood of the town, it doesn't seem
possible he's conspiring with Bulzome.

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Oh blast, if it's revealed,
what can I do... I had
wanted you to come a lot closer...

Oh blast... If it's revealed,
what can I do...? I had
hoped you'd come a lot closer...

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Yes, I am Fiale of Bulzome.
It was unexpected that Conrad still..
had enough strength to talk.

Yes, I am Fiale of Bulzome.
It was unexpected that Conrad still
had enough strength to talk.

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What did you say Fiale! You bastard!
What have you done to Lord Conrad?!

What did you say Fiale!? You bastard!
What have you done to Lord Conrad?!

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But the negotiations failed, so I
decided to make him disappear.
I guess he won't last too much longer
.

But the negotiations failed, so I felt
it was time for Conrad to 'retire.'
You're just in time for the party
.

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How...
could you do such a hideous thing...

How... could you do
such a hideous thing...

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(Synbios) is trying to do you a favor.
Be thankful and accept it.
He's willing to risk his life for you!

(Synbios) is trying to do you a favor.
Be thankful and accept it Conrad.
He's willing to risk his life for you!

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I understand. We shall go there, my Lord.
But before that we must take you to...

I understand... We shall
go there, my Lord... But before
that we must take you to...

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You can't go. Please stay with us...
I'm begging you, please..
Please hold on...

You can't go... Please stay
with us! I'm begging you,
please... Please hold on...

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20 years...
It went so very quickly...
Finally, I can rest.. Finally...

Twenty years...
It went so very quickly...
Finally, I can rest.. Finally...

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I already... know all that...
but but.... this is....

I already... know all that...
but... but... this is...

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That's okay... I understand it all...
You wanted to fight for
... Lord Conrad. I feel your pain.

That's okay... I understand it all...
You wanted to fight for...
Lord Conrad. I feel your pain.

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General Fafhard, whom they reluctantly
fought because of a misunderstanding,
was defeated.
With (Synbios) losing his father
Conrad, he now stands alone with
everything riding on his shoulders...

General Fafhard, whom they reluctantly
fought because of a misunderstanding,
was defeated.
With (Synbios) losing his father
Conrad, he now stands alone with
everything resting on his shoulders...

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Grace, I cannot lie to you.
... you are right. I worry with that
high priest already ahead of us.

Grace, I cannot lie to you...
You are right... I worry with that
high priest already ahead of us.

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We should be offto see Duke Palsis!

...to see Duke Palsis?

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I cannot believe Lord Conrad is gone...
If only he was completely healthy...
he wouldn't have fallen so easily..
(Synbios) is now this land's lord.
Please do not go... Well..
I guess that won't sway you, will it?

I can't believe Lord Conrad is gone...
If only he was completely healthy...
he wouldn't have fallen so easily..
You are now this land's lord.
Please do not go... Well..
I guess that won't sway you, will it?

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We must let Lady Margaret,
of the Malorie territories,
know right away of Lord Conrad's death...
. She loved her father very much,
so I'm sure Lady Margaret would want
to say one last goodbye to him.

We must let Lady Margaret,
of the Malorie territories,
know of Lord Conrad's death...
She loved her father very much,
so I'm sure Lady Margaret would want
to say one last goodbye to him.

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How to spend your golden years alone!
Find yourself a hobby or interest, or
if you should
lose your wife early in life,
or when your kids leave home,
you'll be bored when you retire.

How to spend your golden years alone!
Find yourself a hobby or interest if
you
lose your wife early in life...
Or when your kids leave home...
Otherwise,
you'll be bored
when you retire.

"or if" and "if you" had a {01} and {03}, respectively. "life," and "life..." also had a {03} and {01} respectively.

X5FURA_H.BIN#

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Flagard is dead quiet... It doesn't
feel like I'm back in my hometown.
This town used to lively and festive.

Flagard is dead quiet... It doesn't
feel like I'm back in my hometown.
Flagard used to be lively and festive.

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I see... so Flagard is the homeland
of (Synbios). It must be a nice and
laid back town when things are normal.

I see... so Flagard is your homeland,
(Synbios). It must be a nice and laid
back town when things are normal.

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Finally... it seems a like a showdown
against one of the high priests
of the Bulzome Sect is nearing...
Now it is time to test how effective
my magic is against them.

Finally... it seems like a showdown
against one of the high priests
of the Bulzome Sect is nearing...
Now it is time to test how effective
my magic is against them.

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If that is your decision,
then you must hurry...
I'm sure Prince (Medion) awaits you.

If that is your decision, then
you must hurry... I'm sure
Prince (Medion) awaits you.

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Zero handed
the Treasure Orb of Elbesem to Khan.

Zero handed the Treasure
Orb of Elbesem to Khan.

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If Bulzome is heading for Duke Palsis,
we should be chasing after them.
...Um...What are we to do?

If Bulzome is heading for Duke Palsis,
we should be chasing after them.
...Um... What are we to do?

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SNIFF... poor Lord (Synbios)....
his father Lord Conrad is gone...
How tragic.... SNIFF, SNIFF...

SNIFF... poor Lord (Synbios)....
your father Lord Conrad is gone...
How tragic.... SNIFF, SNIFF...

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Damn the Bulzome Sect!
To achieve their goal,
they took the life of Lord Conrad who...
... they regarded as a hindrance.
Now, to add to this tragedy,
they now aim to take Duke Palsis' life.

Damn the Bulzome Sect!!!
To achieve their goal, they took
the life of Lord Conrad whom...
they regarded as a hindrance.
Now, to add to this tragedy,
they now aim to take Duke Palsis' life.

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Zero could not stand
to see Lord (Synbios) in sorrow,
so he left to see Prince (Medion).
He's very worried about Lord (Synbios),
and his
state of mind.

Zero could not stand
to see you in sorrow,
so he left to see Prince (Medion).
He's very worried about you,
and your
state of mind.

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If only Lord (Synbios)'s father's health...
was okay, this could've been avoided..
I can only express my condolences.

If only Lord (Synbios){1C} father's health...
was okay, this could've been avoided...
I can only express my condolences.

1C appears to be a control code for plurality.