This is a sub-page of The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim/Unused Dialogue.

While Oblivion had a singular extra tab attached to its dialogue labeled "Script Notes", Skyrim added two tabs. One containing "Script Notes" and the other containing "Edits". The latter of these two often contains one earlier iteration of an NPCs dialogue, showing a look inside of the writing process. These earlier lines don't have voiced equivalents, of course.

Ahlam

Bjartur

Final Dialogue	Early Dialogue
You won't get anything out of me, you filthy sons o' horkers.	You won't find anything out from me you sons of Horkers.
I stand with the Stormcloaks. You Imperial dogs will never break my will. Never!	I stand with the Stormcloaks. You Imperial bastards will never break my spirit!

Nazeem

Final Dialogue	Early Dialogue
I actually advise the Jarl on political matters. My input is invaluable, of course. But this is all probably a bit over your head.	I'm one of the few people outside of Dragonsreach to actually advise the jarl on the war. My input is invaluable, of course.

Final Dialogue	Early Dialogue
Looking for my husband Nazeem? Check the Jarl's backside. That's usually where he stuffs himself these days.	Looking for my husband? Have you checked the jarl's backside? That's usually where he stuffs himself these days.
Are you married? You look the type. Make sure you treat your wife with the respect she deserves.	My dearest Nazeem is a very rich, very important man. His reflection tells him as much every morning.
Here you stand, talking to a married woman. Why? Am I that interesting? Or perhaps there are other things on your mind.	There are those, like my husband, who feel the war is a noble endeavor. Everything is noble from the safety of your own home.