Our future is dependent
upon your efforts, so
check your Treasure List
regularly. I'll check in
often... Keep up the pace!
Our future depends on
your efforts, so check
your treasure hoard
regularly. I'll check in
often. Keep up the pace!
The Treasure Hoard is referred to by an earlier name, Treasure List. and is no longer in capital letters.
Demo
Final
There's nothing left to
repossess, so HA!
Besides, there's nothing
left to repossess, so HA!
Demo
Final
Just remember, sitting
back and watching from
afar makes for a boring
life!
Remember, you'll never
get anything done if you
sit back and watch from
afar.
Demo
Final
Louie: It's been three
months since you joined
our company. Isn't it what
you'd call "cool"?
Louie: It's been three
months since you joined
our company, and I'm
sure you love it.
The President's attempts to connect with the youth aren't present in the final message.
Demo
Final
Olimar! I see that you're
making notes in the
treasure list. This is no
scientific jaunt! It's
business! Which is why
the ship is making sales
pitches for your finds.
Olimar! I see that you're
making notes in the
treasure hoard. This is
no scientific jaunt! It's
business! Which is why
the ship is writing sales
pitches for your finds.
Another instance of "treasure list" instead of "treasure hoard".
Demo
Final
Sometimes I think of
where we'd be now if I
hadn't been so stingy...
If I'd purchased space
insurance... But the route
Louie took was always
a safe shipping lane...
I wonder where we'd be
now if I hadn't been so
stingy and purchased
space insurance... But
the route Louie took
was always a safe
shipping lane...
While you two are
dawdling about, my life is
hanging by a thread! Get
to work, slackers!
While you two are
dawdling about, my life
hangs by a thread! Get
to work, slackers!
Demo
Final
Louie, your auntie sent
me some cookies. Now,
I only meant to taste
one, but...then I ate them
all. Sorry. To make up for
it, I shall officially make
you a Cookie Specialist.
Louie, your auntie sent
me some cookies. Now, I
only meant to taste one,
but...then I ate them all.
Sorry. To make up for it,
I shall officially make you
a Cookie Specialist.
Demo
Final
Some say that one
should look to the past,
to places one has been
already, in order to make
new finds...
Some say that you
should look to the past,
to places you have been
already, in order to make
new finds...
Rewritten to sound less awkward.
Demo
Final
All I do now is take calls
from debt collectors.
Thinking it was OK to
work at a leisurely pace
was a big mistake. Work
isn't about quality, it's all
about speed. Go to it!
All I do is take calls from
debt collectors! Thinking
it was OK to work at a
leisurely pace was a big
mistake. Work isn't
about quality, it's all
about speed. Hop to it!
Olimar! You're my hero!
You've erased half of our
debts. Still, things have
become a bit dangerous,
so I'm going into hiding.
Make sure to focus on
work...and don't slack off!
Olimar! You're my hero!
You've erased half of our
debt. Still, things have
become a bit dangerous,
so I'm going into hiding.
Focus on work...and
don't slack off!
"Debts" is no longer plural in the final text.
Demo
Final
Hello... I am still on the
lam from debt collectors...
For the time being, I've
decided to live under the
bridge, but if they catch
me, I don't know what will
become of poor me...
Hello... I am still on the
lam from debt collectors.
For the time being, I've
decided to live under the
bridge, but if they catch
me, I don't know what
they'll do to me...
Demo
Final
I finally have. I'm thinking
maybe I'll just fire you
two ingrates and hire
these nice animals...
I finally have. Maybe I'll
just fire you two ingrates
and hire these nice
animals...
Demo
Final
Today, a group from the
government offices paid
me a visit. They whisked
me out from under the
bridge as if I were trash.
Today, a group from the
government offices paid
me a visit. They kicked
me out from under the
bridge as if I were trash.
Demo
Final
Today, I just missed
getting nabbed by the
debt collectors. I was
able to escape them
thanks to the diet my
wife suggested I go on.
You should try it, too!
Today, I just missed
getting nabbed by the
debt collectors. I was
able to escape them
thanks to my all-grass
diet! You should try it,
too!
The President's previously mention of eating grass comes up again in the finalized message.
Today, I tried building a
small room at the top of
a tree. It reminded me
of my younger days,
when I lived in a little
shed. Remembering those
days makes this bearable.
Today, I tried building a
small room at the top of
a tree. It reminded me
of my younger days,
when I lived in a little
shed. Those memories
help make this bearable.
Demo
Final
If I don't pay off
the company debts right
away, I'm to be buried
in Hocotate swamp. It's
bleak here... Please hurry!
If I don't pay off
the company debt right
away, I'm to be buried
in Hocotate Swamp. It's
bleak here... Hurry!
Hocotate Swamp was changed to a proper name.
Demo
Final
hostage in my place. I'm
going to run....uh, I mean,
I'm going to search for
treasures. Hurry, now!
hostage in my place. I'm
going to run....uh, I
mean...search for
treasures. Hurry up!
Demo
Final
Olimar! You are slow as
molasses. Effective now,
I'm reducing you to a
bottom-rung employee
until you get back on
pace! Seems Louie has
more promise as of late...
Olimar! You are as slow
as molasses. Effective
now, I'm reducing you to
a bottom-rung employee
until you get back on
pace! Lately, Louie has
held more promise...
Demo
Final
Olimar! I believe in you!
Hurry up and get these
debts repaid!
Olimar! I believe in you!
Hurry up and get this
debt repaid!
Standard "debts" change.
Demo
Final
I wonder just how many
days have gone by since
I was captured by the
debt collectors. Olimar...
Louie... Please... I'm almost
done for... Repay..the..
debt! P..l..e...a...s...e...
I wonder how many days
have gone by since I was
captured by the debt
collectors. Olimar...
Louie... I'm almost done
for... Repay...debt!
P...l...e...a...s...e...
Louie! Are you eating
well? When you were just
a little boy, you were a
bit skinny side, so I made
you eat healthily. Be sure
to cook suspect foods
before eating them!
Louie! Are you eating
well? When you were a
boy, you were quite
skinny, so I made you
clean your plate. Be sure
to cook suspicious food
before eating it!
Louie was changed from eating healthily to eating heartily.
Demo
Final
You hated to
play outside, so I made
you walk and eat bugs
and plants. Ah, memories.
You hated to
play outside, so I made
you eat bugs and plants.
Ah, memories...
Why you... Some president
you are! I just got back
from vacation to find
you're on a treasure hunt!
Well, don't bother coming
home until you've found
every item on your list.
Hmmph! Some president
you are! I just got back
from vacation to find out
you're on a treasure hunt!
Well, don't bother coming
home until you've found
every item on your list!
Oh yeah! Oh yeah! My
allowance doubled! And
it's all thanks to my Papa!
Oh yeah! Oh yeah! My
allowance doubled! And
it's all thanks to my papa!
Demo
Final
Lately, I've been getting
a lot of strange mail from
a funny address. It's from
a strange lady asking me
to be her friend... It really
freaked me out. What
should I do, Papa?
Lately, I've been getting
a ton of mail from a
strange person selling
designer items at cut-
rate prices. It sounds
like a deal. Should I send
them your bonus check?
The spam message that Olimar's Son talks about switched in the final version to be funnier.
I think I may have messed
up, darling... I lost a
small fortune buying
lottery tickets. It was all
a nightmare. We may have
to live a little lean for
awhile, I'm afraid.
I think I may have messed
up, darling... I lost a
small fortune buying
lottery tickets. It was all
a nightmare. I'm afraid
we're going to have to
live lean for awhile.
I'm not sure what the
reason is... Love, maybe?
Anyway, hurry up and
come home, and don't
forget to bring souvenirs!
I'm not sure what the
reason is... Love,
maybe? Anyway, hurry up
and come home, and don't
forget to bring souvenirs!
Demo
Final
Dad, today I'm writing on
behalf on Bulbie. Mom
and I completely forgot
to feed him. He got
skinny, but he's been
eating a lot of PikPik
carrots, so he'll be OK.
Dad, today I'm writing on
behalf of Bulbie. Mom
and I completely forgot
to feed him. He got
skinny, but he's been
eating a lot of Pikpik
carrots, so he'll be OK.
"Behalf on" was corrected, and Pikpik was capitalized differently.
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