the cutting room mirror

Mahou no Shoujo Silky Lip

Produced just before Sailor Moon popularized the Super Sentai–influenced team format for magical girls, Mahou no Shoujo Silky Lip is a noble attempt at making an adventure game inspired by the "witch girl" shows that were dominant in the '70s and '80s...which is to say, it's pretty much a blatant ripoff of the 1975 anime Majokko Megu-chan. Our plucky protagonist Lip (what makes her silky is really not clear) must face many trials in the Human Realm in order to beat her rival Isabella and earn the right to become queen of the Magic Realm!

Though it has many interesting ideas, including a distinctive dialogue system sometimes characterized as a predecessor to Sakura Taisen's, it had the misfortune of being developed by a particularly inexperienced team at a company already notorious for shoveling out rushed, half-baked games. The result is a well-intentioned mess whose biggest selling point is probably its theme song. Though in all fairness, it is a pretty good theme song...

Developer Room#

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Map 21 is an unused developer room featuring caricatures of various staff members. It can be accessed by changing the value at 0x5C2152 in an ISO of Track 01 from 0x30 to 0x32, then starting a new game.

This area uses unique graphics, and has a second room accessed through an invisible warp on the right side of the first room.

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遠藤「やあ おじょう
ちゃん ここはもともと
ソフトハウスがあった場所
なんだ でも地獄地震で

地盤が陥没しちゃってね
・・・ ま シナリオとは
全く無関係だから気に
しないでちょうだい」

Endou: "Hi there, miss. This place used to be a software house. The foundations collapsed in a hell earthquake, though...Ah, but it's got nothing to do with the scenario, so don't worry about it."

Game designer and writer Shoujirou Endou.

リップ「人間界にも魔界
に似た所があったのね」

Lip: "So there's even a place in the Human Realm that resembles the Magic Realm."

Lip's response to the above line.

原「没ヴィジュアル 見て
貰いましょう」

Hara: "Have a look at this unused visual."

Screen layout designer Hiroyuki Hara.

斎藤「バリバリーっと
シーン2ですよっ!」

Saitou: "Moving right along to Scene 2!"

Sub-character designer Kimiaki Saitou.

佐野「シーン3です」

Sano: "This is Scene 3."

Visual programmer Hiroaki Sano.

河野「シーン4っす」

Kouno: "This's Scene 4."

Graphic designer Toshimi Kouno (officially credited as "G-Finger Mepiki" with the title "Fang Clan #13").

小川「・・・ 何か用?」

Ogawa: "...Need something?"

Producer/composer Shinobu Ogawa.

たかを「イベントで僕と
握手!! リップさん
シーン5ですよ」

Takawo: "Shake my hand at an event! Lip, this is Scene 5."

Uncertain; could be publicist Takao Yoshioka, though that seems like a rather low-ranking position compared to the others here. This name is deliberately misspelled with を instead of お.

山本「・・・」

Yamamoto: "..."

Technical supervisor Masayasu Yamamoto.

大野「シ シーン6だよ」

Ohno: "H-here's Scene 6."

Manual producer Katsuhisa Ohno.

「ていていてい」

"Teiteitei."

木下「こちら側の世界に
ようこそ」

Kinoshita: "Welcome to our world."

Character designer Takashi Kinoshita, welcoming the player to the second room of the map.

大竹「あーあ シーン7
見てちょうだい・・・」

Ohtake: "Ahh, watch Scene 7..."

Main programmer Satoshi Ohtake.

陶山「へへ・・・」

Suyama: "Heh-heh..."

Battle programmer Hiroaki Suyama.

梅津「・・・」

Umezu: "..."

Sound producer Takaharu Umezu.

清水「ウキャキャキャ
キャキャー!!」

Shimizu: "Ukyakyakyakyakyakyaaa

"

岩田「・・・」

Iwata: "..."

Character design support Takaki Iwata.

「うるせ うるせ
 静かにしろっ!」

"Shuddap, shuddap! Quiet!"

「シュビビビビ!!」

"Shubibibibi!"

人見「・・・」

Hitomi: "..."

Character design support Eiichirou Hitomi.

川和「・・・」

Kawawa: "..."

Graphic designer 川和千鶴, whose name may or may not be read as "Chizu Kawawa."

小無田「・・・」

Komuta: "..."

This name doesn't appear in the credits, but presumably refers to Mitsuaki Komuta, a programmer on Cosmic Fantasy Stories.

高橋「・・・」

Takahashi: "..."

Also doesn't appear in the credits, but is probably Ikuko Takahashi, an artist on Cosmic Fantasy Stories.

Many of the developer NPCs have dialogue referring to unused cutscenes, and they even attempt to play them. These correspond to the cutscene files V009 through V015, which unfortunately were removed from the disc prior to the game's release. As a result, talking to these NPCs simply freezes the game on a black screen.

No map actually contains the necessary script data to load this one. The exit leads to the upper-left corner of the city, right next to the NPC who begs for booze, suggesting it was intended to be entered from there. Unused dialogue for that map mentions Lip falling in a hole; combined with Shoujirou Endou's comments about the foundations collapsing, it's a reasonable guess that walking behind the small hidden alcove in that corner of the map would have caused Lip to "fall" into the developer room.

Graphics#

Conversation Mode#

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The Conversation Mode HUD contains graphics for unused versions of the "angry" and "sad" emotion icons with inverted colors. These may have been intended to be displayed when an emotion is empty and its corresponding option therefore can't be selected, as there is no icon for the "happy" emotion, which can't decrease and thus wouldn't need one for this scenario.

Credits#

Though the images shown in the credits at the end of the game are sepia-toned, some of them also load a unique second palette line that seems to be appropriate for colorizing their content. This is most likely because these graphics were repurposed from scrapped cutscenes that were originally in full color (the shot of the Magic Realm's king can be seen in color in magazine previews, for instance).

Cutscene Leftovers#

Portions of the game's cutscenes files which aren't used for anything, or are used only as temporary storage buffers, are filled with "junk" data, which chiefly seems to consist of uncompressed graphics. They may have come from another game entirely (perhaps Cosmic Fantasy Stories, another Telenet title that came out a few months earlier and shared some staff with this one).

All of these appear several times across multiple files.

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Notes

Might be some kind of background with mountains and sky, along with what seem to be many repeated filler tiles and a set of icons at the end.

Sprite graphics for something?

A font and some arrow icons.

Scene Skip#

If the word at RAM $FFF846 contains a nonzero value, the game will skip all Conversation Mode events, overworld-triggered cutscenes, and battles. The game never writes to this address – indeed, does not even initialize it! It inherits the value left there by the BIOS boot sequence, which happens to be 0x0000 for a Japanese BIOS (and would not be so on a US BIOS, which would have been an issue had this game been released anywhere else).

Text#

General#

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リップ「イザベラ、
   あんまりいじわる
   言わないで・・・」

Lip: "Isabella, don't say such nasty things..."

This message is duplicated in every single Conversation Mode file alongside the strings that are printed in the right-side window (the Angry/Sad/Happy and Yes/No prompts). It's also found in the CLAS and ROOM files that contain intermission scenes for the classroom and Lip's room. No instance of this message is used, and it's unclear why so many copies of it are present.

CLAS#

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3月になりました クラス
のみんなとのお別れが
近ずいているせいか 授業
にも集中できません

It's now March. Perhaps because her parting from everyone is near, Lip can't concentrate on class.

This clearly would have served as an introduction for Episode 10, but it's not used.

翌日になりました リップ
は三人衆のことが気に
なって仕方がありません

The next day...The Gang of Three are weighing terribly on Lip's mind.

This would similarly have been used for an intermission in Episode 10.

Hints#

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・・・決められた通りの
毎日・・・ まるで
ここは監獄の様ね

Just doing as I'm told, every day...This place is like a prison.

Presumably would have been used in Episode 1 when Lip is supposed to be going to class, or perhaps immediately after trying to skip it.

あたしの部屋 どんな部屋
なんだろう・・・

I wonder what my room is like...

Prompting the player to go check Lip's room at the end of Episode 2.

魔法の国に帰るには あの
廃屋に行かないと・・・

To return to the Land of Magic, I need to go to the abandoned house...

For Episode 11. Lip simply keeps talking about Chako at this point.

Battles#

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魔法経験を修得した!

Gained magic EXP!

The game has no EXP system, and indeed just barely has anything that could be called a combat system, so this message isn't used.

Conversation Mode#

Conversation 09: Discussing Lip's first day of school with Shake#

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リップ 「あたし・・・
おちこみそう・・・」

Lip: "I feel like...I'm getting depressed..."

Conversation 30: Narae's confession#

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奈良枝「い いや・・・
娘がな・・・ その・・・
誕生日でな・・・
プレゼントを買おうにも

給料日前で・・・
いや・・・ しかしよく
よく考えれば・・・
やはりな・・・」

Narae: "N-no...My daughter, see...I, uh...Her birthday...I wanted to get her a present, but it was before payday...But uh...When I thought about it hard...In the end, you know..."

Perhaps the most interesting unused line. It appears that Narae was supposed to have a real motive for stealing Lip's pendant in Episode 4. For whatever reason, this was cut, making the whole thing seem very baffling (beyond a vague assertion from Ketcha that he "looked like he had money problems").

Conversation 47: Lip and Isabella meet on New Year's#

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イザベラ「初詣? ふざけ
ないで! なんであたしが
そこまで迎合しないと
いけないの? ばかね!」

Isabella: "A shrine visit? Don't mess with me! Why should I go so far to indulge you? Idiot!"

Obviously a response to Lip's suggestion that they visit the shrine together for New Year's, but a different line is used in that situation.

Conversation 59: Ketcha discusses Lip's return to the Magic Realm#

This entire conversation, clearly intended for the start of Episode 10, is unused in-game, though it's accessible through the conversation test mode (hold A+B+C as the game boots).

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ケチャ「なぁリップ
いよいよあと一ヵ月で
この人間界ともお別れだ」

Ketcha: "Well, Lip, finally one more month till you say goodbye to the Human Realm."

Reaction prompt.
Angry: Go to 1A.
Sad: Go to 1B.
Happy: Go to 1C.

リップ「何が言いたいの?
ケチャ」

Lip: "What're you getting at, Ketcha?"

1A. Go to 2A.

リップ「そうね! 魔導
小学校のみんなにお土産
用意しとかないとね!」

Lip: "That's right! I'll have to get souvenirs for everybody back at Sorcery Primary!"

1C. Go to 2C.

リップ「どうしたら
いいんだろう・・・
あたし」

Lip: "I wonder what I should do...?"

1B. Go to 2B.

ケチャ「ん・・・?
何をイラついている
リップ」

Ketcha: "Hm...? What's got you so riled up, Lip?"

2A. Reaction prompt.
Angry: Go to 3A.
Sad: Go to 3B.
Happy: Go to 3C.

ケチャ「リップ!
君が人間界に来た目的は
なんだ?」

Ketcha: "Lip! What was the purpose for you coming to the Human Realm?"

2B. Go to 3D.

ケチャ「おいおい
気楽なもんだな!」

Ketcha: "Hey now, you're awfully carefree!"

2C. Reaction prompt.
Angry: Go to 3E.
Sad: Go to 3F.
Happy: Go to 3G.

リップ「目的・・・
魔法の国の女王様に
なるための修行をする・・

Lip: "My purpose...To train to be Queen of the Land of Magic...

3D.

それがあたしの目的
・・・」

That's my purpose..."

ケチャ「わかっている
のならそれでいい」

Ketcha: "As long as you understand that, everything's fine."

Reaction prompt.
Angry: Go to 4C.
Sad: Go to 4D.
Happy: Go to 4E.

リップ「イラつきも
するわ! イザベラとの
差は縮まらないし!

このままじゃ修業も
無駄になっちゃう!」

Lip: "Sometimes I'm in a bad mood, all right!? I'm not catching up with Isabella at all!

The way things are going, this training will be pointless!"

3A. Go to 4A.

リップ「え・・・? あ
ごめんねケチャ」

Lip: "Huh...? Oh, sorry, Ketcha."

3B. Go to 4B.

リップ「え?
あはははは!
なんでもないよ!」

Lip: "Huh? Ah-ha-ha-ha-ha! It's nothing!"

3C. End of conversation.

リップ「そうでもないよ
・・・・」

Lip: "That's not it..."

3F. Go to 4G.

リップ「だって 暗くして
てもしかたがない
じゃない!」

Lip: "Well, being all sad's not gonna get me anywhere, is it!?"

3G. Gain 5 assessment points.

リップ「だけど!
魔界の女王になるのが
そんなに大切なこと
なのかしら?

Lip: "But...! Is becoming Queen of the Magic Realm really all that important?

4C.

あたし! どうせなら
このままこっちに
残っていたい!」

If I could, I'd stay here just like this!"

Go to 5A.

リップ「わかってなんか
・・・いないよ・・・」

Lip: "I...don't understand..."

4D. Lose 15 assessment points.

リップ「ごめんねケチャ!
心配かけさせちゃって!」

Lip: "Sorry for making you worry, Ketcha!"

4E. Lose 15 assessment points.

ケチャ「落ち着くんだ
リップ まぁ最終的な
結論は自分で下すしか
ないだろう」

Ketcha: "Calm down, Lip. Well...In the end, you're the one who has to draw your own conclusions."

5A. End of conversation.

ケチャ「おいおい
あやまってどうする?」

Ketcha: "Hey now, what're you apologizing for?"

4B. End of conversation.

ケチャ「わるかった
わるかった 
そう怒るな!」

Ketcha: "I get it, I get it. Don't blow your top!"

4F. Gain 5 assessment points.

ケチャ「おいおい
弱気過ぎるぞ!」

Ketcha: "Hey now, you're getting too beaten down!"

4G. Gain 5 assessment points.

ケチャ「まぁ
あせるな! どのみち
あと少しで全てが
決定する!」

Ketcha: "Hey, don't get flustered! Whatever happens, it'll all be decided before long!"

4A. End of conversation.

Maps#

Map 01 – Magic School (Episode 1)#

Judging by its ID number, this map was probably the first implemented, and shows signs of being used to test a few concepts that were refined or scrapped by the time later maps were developed.

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校長「さっさと自分の部屋
に戻りなさい!」

Headmaster: "Get back to your room, now!"

If Lip tries to skip class, then after talking to the headmaster, she's instructed to go to her room. This unused variation of the line is more forceful, and was perhaps intended to be used if Lip chose options in the dialogue that provoked an angry response from the headmaster. In the finished game, choices made in Conversation Mode never have any effect on the events that follow (save for the very end of the game).

「リップの評価ポイントが
 -10されてしまった」

"Lip's assessment points have changed by -10."

A peculiar message that would have indicated a point deduction directly on the overworld, something that never happens in the finished game. It's also wrapped in quotes, which is not the case for the used messages.

「扉は閉じています中には
 入れません」

"The door is shut, and you can't enter."

These next several messages are all similar to used (or in some cases unused) flavor text for examining various objects, but are all wrapped in quotes, unlike the finalized versions. May have simply been used for testing the "look" interaction before the final game's writing conventions were established.

「歴代校長の肖像画が
 飾ってあります」

"Portraits of the successive headmasters hang here."

「授業を受けるための
 魔導机です」

"It's a magic desk for taking lessons."

リップ「ナストーク先生」

Lip: "Professor Nastock."

Lip greeting (probably) Nastock. In the finished game, their only interaction is Nastock telling her to take her seat.

リップ「え ええ・・・」

Lip: "Y-yes..."

No context; could have been used anywhere.

リップ「す すこし頭が
混乱して・・・」

Lip: "M-my head's kind of buzzing..."

Similar to what Lip says after Lavar warps her to the headmaster's office.

リップは自分の部屋に
戻ってきました

Lip has returned to her room.

Seems like narration that would have been shown if Lip was automatically returned to her room after talking to the headmaster. Instead, the player has to walk back manually.

これは魔導机といって魔法
の勉強をするための机です

This is a desk for studying magic, called a sorcery desk.

Obviously intended to be used if a desk was examined, but that's impossible to do.

Map 02 – City, Area A#

This covers the four upper-left squares of the city map, notably including the top-left area where the developer room spits Lip out. Presumably, like Map 01, it was created early on and used for testing.

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「シゴウしゃげたるぞ」[09];
evt_mes16[09]「こんなん どこの
 もんじゃ?」

"I'm gonna rip ya a new one, punk." [09]; evt_mes16[09]"Hey, what're you doin' here?"

This set of messages contains multiple lines of dialogue that are themselves used, interspersed with what seem to be developer comments. The comments are set off from the text with the byte 0x09, notated as "[09]" here, which in the final game has no special effect.

「ワレ 道あけんかい!」;
evt_mes18[09]「ほんとうの自由って何
 だろう・・・」

"Beat it, chump!"[09]; evt_mes18[09]"I wonder what it means to be truly free..."

リップ「キャー!!」

Lip: "Eeek!"

リップは人為的に作られた
落し穴に落ちてしまい
ました

Lip falls into an artificially created pit.

As mentioned above, this was probably the way to enter the developer room.

Map 03 – City, Area B#

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寺岡さんの家・・・?
ここを一つ北に上がった
とこの古本屋がそうだよ

Teraoka's house...? It's the used bookstore you'll find if you go north once from here.

Would have been used for an NPC giving directions to Chako's house in Episode 3. Rather cruelly, it's not used, leaving only a vague hint from Lip to "go up" from DomeDonald's. Note the lack of quotes despite this clearly being NPC dialogue.

Map 06 – City, Area F#

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店の前にはピエロを模した
人形が置いてあります
今にも動き出しそうな
気配です

A mannequin shaped like a clown is in front of the store. It looks like it could spring to life any second.

A message for examining the mannequin in front of DomeDonald's, which isn't actually possible to do.

Map 08 – City, Area H#

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主婦「大学生のアパート
・・・? アパートなら
そこに建ってるけど」

Housewife: "A college student's apartment...? There's an apartment building just over there."

A message pointing the player to the student's apartment in Episode 3.

ケチャ「リップ!
開いてる窓の外から
調べるんだ!」

Ketcha: "Lip! Look in the open window!"

A message prompting the player to check the window of the student's apartment. In the final game, this occurs automatically as soon as Lip gets close enough to the window.

Map 11 – Castle (Episode 1)#

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ケチャ「さ 私も行く
かな」

Ketcha: "All right, maybe I should go too."

No context or obvious use.

リップ「キャー!」

Lip: "Eeek!"

No context or obvious use.

リップの評価ポイントが
-10引かれました

Lip's assessment points have been deducted by -10.

Another message for a point deduction directly on the overworld, which never happens in the final game.

魔導士「人間界は危険な
世界と聞いております
気をつけてください」

Mage: "I've heard the Human Realm is a dangerous land. Please be careful."

王の間です 玉座に魔導
覇王が座っています

This is the king's room. The Supreme Warlock is seated on the throne.

Description for the throne room which is simply never used.

Map 12 – City, Area L#

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「シゴウしゃげたるぞ」[09];
evt_mes16[09]「こんなん どこん
 もんじゃ?」

"I'm gonna rip ya a new one, punk." [09]; evt_mes16[09]"'Ey, what're you doin' here?"

Nearly identical to the unused message in Map 02, but changes どこの to the slang form どこん in the second sentence.

Map 12 – City, Area K#

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ここって すっごく家賃が
高いマンションなのよね
・・・

This condo here's got super high rent...

An NPC who would have pointed out Isabella's condo. Very much like the NPC who would have pointed out Chako's store, this message was somewhat bafflingly omitted. It also similarly lacks quotes.

Map 16 – City, Area F (Episode 1)#

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露出「・・・」
立ったまま気絶しています
返事がありません

Flasher: "..."
He's knocked out standing up. You get no response.

In the final game, after the battle with the flasher, Shake appears and immediately teleports him away. It appears that it was originally intended for her (or Lip) to knock him out, leaving him available for interaction afterward.

露出の記憶が消されて
いきます

The flasher's memory is erased.

リップ「・・・!?」

Lip: "...!?"

Map 17 – City, Area G (Episode 1)#

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・・・リップと同い歳
くらいの少年たちが 中年
の男性をいじめています

...Some boys around Lip's age are harassing a middle-aged man.

While certainly an accurate description of the situation, this isn't used.

Map 31 – City, Area D (Episode 5, scene before entering haunted mansion)#

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茶子「おそーい!」

Chako: "You're late!"

Chako scolding the player for being late. In this scene, the game requires the player to talk to the other characters in a specific order to get them to join the party, and talking to them in any other order causes them to give a "you're late" message instead. Chako is the first one to join, so her "late" message is never used.

サル「遅刻でやんす」

Saru: "You're late, yup."

Talking to Saru always immediately triggers the event where he gets scared and leaves, so he never has a chance to say this.

茶子「あれれ」

Chako: "Huh?"

The next few lines are for an unused variant of this scene that was meant to occur if the player had previously turned down Chako's request to explore the mansion. In this case, the characters would be surprised to see Lip show up. In the final, this detail was omitted, and they simply act as though she was expected to come regardless.

ハゲタンク「お おお?」

Hagetank: "O-oh?"

サル「なんでやんすか?」

Saru: "What is it, yup?"

くるみ「おーたけちゃん
やっぱり来た!」

Kurumi: "Ohtake, you came after all!"

Note that in the final game, Kurumi always calls Lip by her first name.

Map 33 – City, Area F (Episode 7, encounter with delinquents)#

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リップ「(小声で)
リラルル・ラリルル・
リラルルル
魔導・重力波!」

Lip: "(whispering)
Lilalulu, lalilulu, lilalululu!
Magic: Gravity Wave!"

In this scene, the game requires Lip to use Gravity Alteration to fend off the two delinquents. However, there's also alternate dialogue for using Gravity Wave instead, which presumably would have had the same effect.

Map 35 – City, Area F (Episode 8)#

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「やあ 明けまして
 おめでとう」

"Hey, happy new year!"

Generic NPC dialogue.

リップは戦闘にそなえる
ため 普段着に魔導換着
しました

In preparation for battle, Lip has magically switched to her normal outfit.

For some reason, the game never actually shows Lip changing to her normal outfit, and instead just has a very tacked-on message to explain it after the fact.

Map 38 – Haunted Mansion (Episode 5)#

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古めかしい武具や防具が
陳列されています

Ancient-looking weapons and armor are on display.

Unused description of the weapon room.

おびただしい量の白骨が
散乱しています

Vast numbers of bones are scattered about.

Unused description of the, uh, skeleton room.

茶子「リ リップちゃん
もう帰ろうよ・・・」

Chako: "L-Lip, let's go home already..."

Map 40 – Sigh Supply#

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ニセ大竹氏「会話の
チェックをやりたぃって?
そりゃめでたい・・・」

Fake Ohtake: "You're telling me ya wanna check Conversation Mode? Well, wonderful..."

Some sort of test event that was previously found on this map. These lines don't seem to be referenced anymore, so there's no telling what exactly it did.

ニセ大竹氏「よくここまで
チェックしたなぁ・・・
大したもんだよ・・・

ま まちなよ これは
俺からのプレゼントだ
ちょっとばかし効果が
上がってるがな・・・」

Fake Ohtake: "Good job checking this far...It's a lotta work...

W-wait. This is a present from me. The effect will increase just a little bit, though..."

Map 41 – Magic School (ending)#

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リップ「先生こんにちは」

Lip: "Hello, Professor."

Lip greeting a generic teacher. The only teacher accessible in the ending is Lavar, who has unique dialogue.

教師「あら リップさん
今日も元気そうね」

Teacher: "Oh, Lip, you're looking as lively as ever today."

The teacher's response if Lip wasn't selected to be queen.

教師「リ リップ様!
こんにちは!!」

Teacher: "L-Lady Lip! Hello!"

And if she was.

Map 42 – Castle (ending)#

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給仕「リップ様
おめでとうございます」

Server: "Congratulations, Lady Lip."

The server NPC found in the castle in Episode 1 was apparently intended to reappear at the end of the game, but she's absent.

Map 49 – Haunted Mansion (Episode 11)#

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リップもイザベラも体力が
もたず 立っているのが
やっとです

Lip and Isabella alike are out of stamina, and it's all they can do to stand.

A line that was clearly meant to appear after Lip and Isabella's battle with the fugitives, but doesn't. Isabella herself instead comments that she's barely able to stand.

リップ「リラルル 
ラリルル リラルルル!
魔導 空間移動!」

Lip: "Lilalulu, lalilulu, lilalululu! Magic: Spatial Transfer!"

An alternate version of Lip casting magic on Chako at the end of the mansion event; in the final game, she uses both Memory Manipulation and Spatial Transfer, but here, it's only the latter. From this and the dialogue immediately preceding the event, it's pretty clear that the player was intended to have the option to choose whether or not to wipe Chako's memory, but this alternate path was dropped for whatever reason.

イザベラ「寺岡は多分
地下室ね」

Isabella: "Teraoka might be in the basement."

Map 51 – School (Episode 9, Valentine's Day and leadup)#

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「明日の給食は うま煮
 休みたいなぁ・・・」

"Tomorrow's lunch is umani. I want a vacation..."

「誰に贈ろうかな・・・」

"Wonder who I should give it to..."

城ケ谷「ふぅ・・・ 春は
まだ先ね・・・」

Shirogaya: "Whew...Still a ways till spring..."

奈良枝「おお 逆上がりが
できない大竹じゃないか」

Narae: "Oh, if it isn't Ohtake, the one who couldn't do a back hip circle."

校長「明日はバレン
タインデーてすねぇ」

Principal: "So, tomorrow's Valentine's Day."

用務員「チョコレートの
くずは ごみ箱に捨てて
もらいたいよ!」

Custodian: "Make sure you throw your chocolate wrappers in the trash can!"

Map 53 – School (Episode 2)#

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「すげー髪の色! 気持ち
 わりー!」

"What a crazy hair color! Man, that looks nasty!"

The school is oddly devoid of NPCs after Lip's first day of school, but the game has some dialogue that seems to have been meant to appear then.

「なんですか?」

"What is it?"

「すごい・・・」

"Oh, wow..."

矢追「み 緑の髪の転校生
・・・ も もしや・・」

Yaoi: "A g-green-haired transfer student...Could you be...?"

「あなた 隣のクラスの
 転校生ね」

"You're the transfer student in the other class, right?"

有川「・・・ふん」

Arikawa: "...Hmph."

城ケ谷「なに? 大竹
さん」

Shirogaya: "What is it, Ohtake?"

Map 56 – DomeDonald's (Episode 2)#

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シェイク「お帰り リップ
どう? 初登校の感想は」

Shake: "Welcome back, Lip. Well? What did you think of your first day at school?"

リン「お帰りなさいリップ
ちゃん」

Rin: "Welcome back, Lip."

Map 58 – DomeDonald's (Episode 4)#

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リップは魔導器
「ナルバンの指輪」を
シェイクに返しました

Lip returns the magic channeler "Ring of Nalvan" to Shake.

While it would make perfect sense to return Shake's ring to her after finishing with it, it simply can't be done. As the game's manual openly acknowledges, the "give" command does absolutely nothing, and Shake's very important magic channeler remains in Lip's inventory forever.

Map 60 – School (Episode 6)#

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校長「・・・もうすぐ
運動会ですねぇ・・・」

Principal: "...Almost field day, huh..."

奈良枝「うむ・・・ 今日は
気分が悪い・・・」

Narae: "Mrm...Not feeling good today..."

校長「子供達が運動に興じる
姿・・・ わたしは感動して
いる・・・」

Principal: "Seeing the children enjoy themselves at sports...It moves me..."

Map 61 – School (Episode 7)#

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奈良枝「あと少しで冬休み
だな!」

Narae: "We're almost to winter break!"

Episode 7 begins with Shirogaya talking to Lip in the staff room. Afterward, Lip is immediately sent to the front of DomeDonald's, with no chance to move freely in the school. However, there is substantial NPC dialogue that's clearly intended for this point.

町川「大竹さん また
呼出し?」

Machikawa: "You got called to the office again, Ohtake?"

西村「城ケ谷さん 最近
いらついてるみたいよ」

Nishimura: "Shirogaya's seemed irritable lately."

校長「クリスマス・・・
クリスマス・・・」

Principal: "Christmas...Christmas..."

「今年の冬はあったかいな
 ・・・」

"Warm winter this year..."

清水「よう! 大竹!
城ケ谷先生から呼出しか」

Shimizu: "Hey there, Ohtake! Miss Shirogaya call you here?"

「今年のプレゼントは
 なにかな?」

"Wonder what my present will be this year?"

「寒いなー」

"So cold..."

殿鳥「やあ大竹 先生に
呼出し受けたんだって?
気に入られてんな!」

Tonotori: "Hi there, Ohtake. Heard your teacher called you in? She must like you!"

「通信簿が不安・・・
 奈良バカのやつ 女子に
 きびしいから・・・」

"I'm worried about my report card...Narae-'m-so-dumb's tough on girls..."

有川「帰ろ 帰ろ」

Arikawa: "Gotta get home."

「今日こそはグフを手に
 いれるぞ」

"Today's the day I'll finally get a Guf."

城ケ谷「どうしたの?
大竹さん?」

Shirogaya: "What's wrong, Ohtake?"

校長「人間・・・ 自分で
思っているほど 自分の力
はあてにはなりませんな
・・・」

Principal: "Humans...Their power is not so reliable as they themselves think..."

Map 66 – DomeDonald's (Episode 7)#

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ドメ「ただいま」

Dome: "I'm home."

There are several unused lines that suggest there was intended to be an extra day's worth of events in Episode 7 to show a more gradual decline in Dome's mental state.

ドメ「うん・・・
何か頭痛がする・・・」

Dome: "Ugh...I've got a bit of a headache..."

ドメ「おかしい・・・
何かが違う」

Dome: "Strange...Something's off."

翌日 12月23日になり
ました ドメおじさんの
様子は相変らずです

The next day, December 23rd...Uncle Dome's behavior hasn't changed.

リップ「まずは・・・
シェイクおばさんの魔導書
で調べ物でもしようかな」

Lip: "To start with...Maybe I should check on things in Aunt Shake's grimoires."

ケチャ「それがいい
ドメがもしおかしく
なったら事だからな・・」

Ketcha: "Good idea. Would be good in case Dome starts acting funny..."

Map 67 – DomeDonald's (Episode 8)#

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リップ「シャワーでも・・
浴びようかな・・・」

Lip: "Maybe I should...take a shower, or something..."

リップ「イザベラ・・・
新年にわざわざ尋ねて来る
なんて・・・ やっぱり
寂しかったのかな・・・」

Lip: "Isabella...She went out of her way to visit for New Year's...Maybe she's lonely after all..."

リップ「いつもの服に
着替えよう・・・」

Lip: "I'll change into my normal clothes..."

リップ「今日はもう遅い
から 外出はやめとか
ないと・・・」

Lip: "It's late, so I'd better not go outside..."

Map 70 – DomeDonald's (Episode 11)#

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ドメ「リップさん
お早よう」

Dome: "Good morning, Lip."

リップ「みんなにあいさつ
していかないと・・・」

Lip: "I need to say hello to everyone..."

Map 71 – Teraoka Books (Episode 11)#

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「ぶつ ぶつ ぶつ」

"(mutter) (mutter) (mutter)"

Map 72 – School (Episode 11)#

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「どいて」

"Outta the way."

「今年こそは 南海が優勝
 するはずだ・・・」

"This will be the year the Southern Sea finally wins the championship..."

Referring to the Southern Sea Hawks, the baseball team currently known as the Fukuoka SoftBank Hawks.

「五年三組の子って 何か
 老け込んでるのよね」

"The kids in class 5-3 seem like they've aged somehow."

Map 74 – School (Episode 2)#

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少女「もう遅いから帰ん
ないと・・・」

Girl: "It's late, so I need to get home..."

Map 75 – Classroom (Episode 3)#

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6月 リップもそろそろ
人間界での生活に
なれてきました そんな
ある日のこと・・・

June. Lip is finally settling into life in the Human Realm. On one such day...

This in-game narration was dropped in favor of an intermission scene in CLAS instead.

リップ「さてと 帰ろう
かな・・・ イザベラも
先に帰った様だし・・・
今日は茶子ちゃん休んで


たけど 何かあったの
かな?」

Lip: "All right, I guess I should head home...After all, it looks like Isabella's already left...

Chako was absent today. I wonder if something happened?"

Would probably have continued on from the above narration. This doesn't match the situation that actually occurs in the final game, where Isabella is still in the classroom at the start of the episode.

Map 77 – Classroom (Episode 6)#

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城ケ谷「私 運動会って
嫌いよ・・・ うざった
くって・・・」

Shirogaya: "I hate field day...So annoying..."

This line seems to have been meant for Shirogaya before Anegishi's injury, but she doesn't appear in the classroom at all before that happens.

Map 79 – Classroom (Episode 9)#

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リップは相原さんに
チョコレートを返しました

Lip returns the chocolates to Aihara.

As previously noted, the "give" command doesn't work at all.

Map 80 – Classroom (Episode 10)#

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茶子「茶子 リップちゃん
のこと心配してるの・・」

Chako: "I'm worried about you, Lip..."

海音寺「いっそ校舎が爆発
しちまえばいいのに・・」

Kaionji: "If anything, it'd be nice if the school exploded..."

This line is clearly meant for the scene where the explosion occurs during class, but Kaionji isn't present in that scene. It's possible somebody noticed that the number of NPCs on that screen was causing sprite dropout when the menu was opened, and he was removed to reduce the issue.

Map 82 – City, Area G (Episode 6)#

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相原「大変な事に
なっちゃったね・・・」

Aihara: "This has turned into a real mess, huh..."