Text Changes

This is a sub-page of Proto:Conker's Bad Fur Day/ECTS Demo.

Windy#

Mrs. Bee#

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OH THOSE NASTY, NASTY WASPS.	OH, THOSE NASTY, NASTY WASPS.

A comma was added.

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WHATEVER SHALL WE DO ?	WHATEVER SHALL WE DO?

An extra space was removed before the question mark.

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MY BEAUTIFUL HIVE HAS GONE	MY BEAUTIFUL HIVE HAS GONE,

Another comma was added. Even then, it doesn't seem to flow properly visually, as there's no text below it.

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HOPE SHE'S RICH COS' SHE AIN'T CUTE.	HOPE SHE'S RICH 'COS SHE AIN'T CUTE.

Punctuation was moved to the other side of the word 'COS'.

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WHAT DO YOU WANT ME TO DO ABOUT IT.	WHAT DO YOU WANT ME TO DO ABOUT IT ?

This sentence was changed from a statement to a question. Despite this, they failed to fix the extra space before the question mark.

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PLEASE GET IT BACK FOR US	PLEASE GET IT BACK FOR US,

Another comma was added. Someone seems to have forgot the key existed...

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OR I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M GOING TO DO.	OR I DON'T KNOW WHAT WE'RE GOING TO DO.

Word replacement. This makes Mrs. Bee suggest that both Conker and her are involved.

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OK OK CALM DOWN I'LL GO AND GET IT FOR YOU.	OK, OK, CALM DOWN! I'LL GO AND GET IT FOR YOU.

This section of dialog has an embarrassing lack of punctuation in the demo.

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NOW WHERE IS IT	NOW WHERE IS IT ?

Punctuation was added again where it belongs. Yet again a space was added after the question mark.

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SOME WISE GUYS TRYING TO STEAL OUR NICE NEW HIVE.	SOME WISE GUY'S TRYING TO STEAL OUR NICE NEW HIVE.

Another punctuation fix. In the early version of the line, it sounds as if multiple people are stealing the hive; the added apostrophe makes it clear that one person is stealing it.

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C 'MON BOSS ! LET'S GO GET HIM.	C'MON BOSS ! LET'S GO GET HIM.

Extra space after punctuation was removed.

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YEAH, LETS GET HIM!	YEAH, LET'S GET HIM!

More punctuation fixes.

It's War#

Sole Survivor#

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HEY, WHERE'S THE REST OF EM ?	HEY, WHERE'S THE REST OF 'EM ?

An apostrophe was added.

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THIS IS IT I THINK.	THIS IS IT, I THINK.

A comma was added.

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YEH I'M THE ONLY ONE.	YEAH, I'M THE ONLY ONE.

The letter A and a comma were added.

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WHATS GOING ON HERE ?	WHAT'S GOING ON HERE ?

An apostrophe was added.

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TEDIZS EVERYWHERE.	TEDIZ EVERYWHERE.

The letter S was removed.

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TEDIZS...	TEDIZ...

Same thing as above.

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MACHINE GUN NESTS, YOU GOTTA CLEAR EM OUT BOY.	MACHINE GUN NESTS, YOU GOTTA CLEAR 'EM OUT, BOY.

An apostrophe and a comma were added.

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OK SOLDIER.	OK, SOLDIER.

A comma was added.

Multi: Total War#

SHC#

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OK GUYS, ATTEN...TION!	OK, GUYS, ATTEN...TION!

A comma was added.

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YOU FIND YOURSELF EITHER A GASMASK,	YOU FIND YOURSELF EITHER A GAS MASK,

Added space in the word "gas mask".

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BECAUSE YOU DON'T WANT TO BE OUTSIDE	BECAUSE YOU DON'T WANT TO BE OUTSIDE .

A period was added.

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NO SIR.	NO, SIR.

A comma was added.

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ANY QUESTIONS BOYS?	ANY QUESTIONS, BOYS?

Another comma was added.

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WELL GOOD LUCK.	WELL, GOOD LUCK.

Yet another comma was added.

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GREAT GUYS, EVERY ONE OF EM.	GREAT GUYS, EVERY ONE OF 'EM.

An apostrophe was added.

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YOU DID A FINE JOB SOLDIERS.	YOU DID A FINE JOB, SOLDIERS.

A comma was added.

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BUT DONT FORGET ABOUT YOUR BROTHERS IN ARMS	BUT DON'T FORGET ABOUT YOUR BROTHERS IN ARMS

An apostrophe was added.

Tediz#

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RETRIEVE THE CANNISTER HERE ,	RETRIEVE THE CANISTER HERE,

The letter N and an extra space before the comma were removed.

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THEN INSERT BELOW .	THEN INSERT BELOW.

An extra space was removed.

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FOR THE FUHRRY .	SUPREME VICTORY.

The victory quote was changed.

Mulit: Colors#

SHC#

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LOOK AT THIS SCUM ?	LOOK AT THIS SCUM.

The question mark was changed to a period.

Mulit: The Vault#

Heist#

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OK WISEGUYS,	OK, WISE GUYS,

A comma was added and the word "wiseguys" was splitted up.

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HERE 'S THE SCORE.	HERE'S THE SCORE.

An extra space was removed.

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RULE NUMBER ONE,	RULE NUMBER ONE.

A comma was changed to a period.

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MY WAY, OR HE'S A DEAD MOTHER**** WAY,	MY WAY, OR HE'S A DEAD MOTHER**** WAY.

Another comma was changed to a period.

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THERE AIN 'T NO MORE RULES.	THERE AIN'T NO MORE RULES.

An extra space was removed.

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WE ARE ROBBING THE FERAL RESERVE BANK,	WE ARE ROBBING THE FERAL RESERVE BANK

A comma was removed.

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HERE 'S THE JOINT.	HERE'S THE JOINT.

An extra space was removed.

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YOU 'LL NOTICE IT 'S NOT VERY WELL GUARDED,	YOU'LL NOTICE IT'S NOT VERY WELL GUARDED.

Another extra spaces were removed and the comma was changed to a period.

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ONE EACH,	ONE EACH.

Another comma was changed to a period.

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MR BLUE...	MR. BLUE...

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MR RED...	MR. RED...

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MR YELLOW...	MR. YELLOW...

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MR GREEN...	MR. GREEN...

The abbreviated form of "Mister" was changed from UK to US English grammatical standards.

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ONCE INSIDE IT 'S EVERY MAN FOR HIMSELF,	ONCE INSIDE, IT'S EVERY MAN FOR HIMSELF.

A comma was added and the other one at the end was changed to a period.

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LET 'S GO TO WORK.	LET'S GO TO WORK.

An extra space was removed.

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C 'MON TOUGH GUY,	C'MON, TOUGH GUY,

An extra space was removed and a comma was added.

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WELL IF YOUR WAITING FOR EM.	WELL, IF YOU'RE WAITING FOR 'EM.

A comma and an apostrophe were added.

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BECAUSE I EXPECT THAT'S WHAT THERE DOING RIGHT NOW.	BECAUSE I EXPECT THAT'S WHAT THEY'RE DOING RIGHT NOW.

Changed an adverb to a contraction.